Yikes. So I saw one of your new stories and figured I should be caught up, so I began reading your Eon story from the beginning.

And I’m very concerned. I like your writing but I feel like you (at least when you wrote this) seem to not really have an understanding of how the Jedi see the Dark Side and the Sith.

Because there is no way they would ever allow someone like Xur to exist in their order. Ever. Someone who goes between the light and dark sides of the force like flipping a switch is way too big a risk for them.

so does the OC look like Darth maul?

excellent job on the chapter, love the story

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