| Reviews for We Have To Play |
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Maxaronimaxipad chapter 1 . 12/10/2015 LOL this is the best LIS fanfic ever! |
badkidoh chapter 1 . 11/16/2015 Good story. |
matjojo chapter 1 . 8/28/2015 WOW, nice story, I like the idea of it, hella hyped for the next chapter |
aboywhowantedtobegod chapter 1 . 8/18/2015 I enjoyed this short fic, it was funny and made me smile, not to mention well written! Be cool to see Max get up to more shenningans like this :) Keep doing what you do, friend! |
Sam chapter 1 . 8/13/2015 It would be soo cool if we could really to something like that in game |
olikage chapter 1 . 8/11/2015 Nice one man! Really did put a smile on my face! Don't rush yourself at making stories, be sure to take time for yourself. We are behind you! Stay awesome! |
VanossWriting chapter 1 . 8/7/2015 I bet Max planned that while she was in the hospital. Like she was as gonna rob a bank; find out where the cameras are, link the security guards' patrol routes, and steal the money… then rewind so no one ever knows except for Max because she still has the money. I swear, she's somehow related to Stewie from Family Guy. This was great, man! |
Soirreb chapter 1 . 8/7/2015 Only the pics from her room, eh? That sounds like there are more pics to be found! I love that Chloe would want to mess with herself first! Poor Joyce finding out like she did, too! I always like seeing your stories and updates, and this is no exception. You stay hella too! |
LIFEISSTRANGER chapter 1 . 8/7/2015 oh my god that was so fucking funny, LOL! max is such a dirty minded prankster! lol, i loved this, it was so funny and adorable, it was a fun read!:) badass one shot as always:) |
Candle in the Night chapter 1 . 8/7/2015 That idea is both awesome and disturbing. Seriously trippy to have future Chloe give past Chloe a message proving that she was the one who suggested the idea. Some of the idea anyway! Max Caulfield as a dirty minded prankster is something I can get behind as well. That shy geek image ain't gonna be fooling me for much longer. And sympathy to Joyce for finding out about her daughter's... activities in probably the most horrific way possible, the only thing being worse being walking in while those photos were being taken! |
surroundedbystars chapter 1 . 8/7/2015 This is a good short story and both Max and Chloe are in character. I do have a few points of critique, though. I would have included some bits of description of the town being cleaned up: maybe have Chloe looking out the window and seeing the Oregon National Guard and saying something like 'Sergeant shitstain would be in his element about now' or maybe the news playing on the TV with the Prescott Estate being raided by an FBI SWAT/HRT team or something just to let us know that time has passed. Secondly, I would have included something more at the end, like maybe Chloe staring at Max as she's listening to their recording and grinning like a child that's just got away with stealing cookies. "What are you smiling at, Max?" "Nothing..." But that's just what I would have done. As it stands, We Have to Play is a good story. Thanks for writing it. |
TM Calypso chapter 1 . 8/7/2015 this was a nice little fic. Makes me wonder what else Max has done to "play" |
Jess94Phase chapter 1 . 8/7/2015 Just pure awesomesause! Keep at it! 3 |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2015 This is awesome you write these charcters tones perfectly :) |
LilPhatFox chapter 1 . 8/7/2015 This was hilarious, I can see Chloe wanting to screw around with someone (even her past self) with Max's time powers. XD I love all your stories but especially the short light hearted ones! Anyways, ~ Stay Awesome ~ |