Paradise of torture, ha! Good one :)

Frodo longing for what he rightly deserves. I like it. Update soon.

was good. sad and longing. i like.

Aw _ Its so sweet

Oh, that was sooooo sad.

But I can understand it. To be so close, and yet so far from the one you love really is like madness.

I hope Sam and Frodo get together happily, somehow...

WOW! *applauses* that is awesome...please continue make more stories with sam and frodo happy together forever they deserve it...please

this is a good story iand will make a good fic i believe.

*adds to story list*

i will be checking in from time to time just to see if there's anything new for me to read.

good inkerz.

shaunah.

I think this little story was great. It has great angst and you did that very well. I particularly liked the "My Sam. My own... My Precious" part. I'm just disgusted that would consider this a 'R' rated story... IMHO, 'PG-13' would be pushing it.

that was so cool!

What a beautifully written story. Very sweet and romantic. I love Frodo/Sam stories. I hope to see more of your writing soon.

Nice...I always found it terribly unfair that Sam ended up with Rosie when he was so obviously meant to be with Frodo.

O...M...G. How angsty. You write really beautifully, I absolutely love it. Please, please write more, I would hate to see Frodo not get Sam in the end. Keep that in mind. I will be very dissappointed if poor Frodo stays tortured...

-ZoSo

my god... don't tell me you're stopping here! lol... i really want to see more... aaaaaaaaaaahhhh *heart*

Poor, poor Frodo.

A really well-written story about my favourite pairing. I really enjoyed this, and what struck me most was the fact that Frdodo didn't know how much time has passed. When I think of Valinor, it never really occurred to me that time may not be measured, but reading this made me think a bit more about that.

I really, really want to hear more of this, maybe from Sam's perspective or something. There's nothing better than a nice reunion.

"I am swept back into the paradise and torture I have created for myself." This is really nice too, it's a fantastic description of what Frodo must be feeling.

Are you going to carry this on?