You even copy the one-liners! Ugh can you report stories for plagiarism?

Seriously. It’s so unoriginal that it went almost exactly the same with only minor tweaks. The overpowered guard let his charge get kidnapped for whatever reason. The lead kidnapper gets neutralised while the rest of them make off with his charge. While they defile her, his feelings given form shows up as large suit of armour that is impervious to spells. Come off it.

This is pretty much a copy of another story, from Lily waiting for Harry every year at the sorting to his emotion given form. You’ve just changed names, made the heroine Cho instead of Fleur and made it Asian instead of French.

Hope you keep updating, it's a very promising story.

This is the same thing as Deprived, by The Crimson

The revelation is ABSOLUTELY unnecessary. His name was already reavealed and he took off his pendant. Why did he have to announce himself? AND why did he have to reveal a sword that technically has no business in a school setting. useless fanfare and flair. Totally killed the good vibe of the story. Poor strutting for a boy who likes to live in the dark. You contradict his entire demeanour by doing that as I have said before in a previous review. reading it again, I can be absolutely assured, you really just wanted to show off despite the character you created for him which is bad on all accounts. Ruins the aspect you made for the story. What is also aggrevating is that you had Dumbledore, who promised to keep Harry's identity a secret, say it outloud. What was really stopping the man from just saying Xin or Dante? Really? What was stopping him? Nothing magical I bet. Even worse was that you don't even explain why he said his full name, not even the books go the extra mile of saying "james". Very jarringly bad narrating if I do say so myself.

Great chapters up to now! I hope your gf is as good as you!

*sigh*
well I started reading again from the begging because I forgot what the story was about. Only to come to the end and find out you aren't continue it...I get that you are doing an AN, but please also say something in the summary of the story. I got my hopes up and dashed. I was looking forward to a new chapter.
So please put something in the summary so people don't re-read all the way through only to get to the disappointing AN

Chapter 4 and 5 is the same.

Harry Potter parring with Cho/Fleur

Awesome story, humorous with the right amount of action. I am just waiting for there to be romance and a little bit of redemption for the character growth that is a natural part of these stories. Can't wait for more )

Taiwan is a part of China!

OMFG! I'v been waiting for this ever since forever! A bodyguard-themed HP fanfic with a Harry/Cho as a pairing, I could not ask for more, well except for more Harry/Cho moments hahaha

I am certainly looking forward to every update of this story! Keep it up!

Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one.

Should we be calling those attempts wand fodder (instead of cannon fodder)? Perhaps they are just trying to relax security? I don't think that will work, as Harry clearly suspects the attempt will be during the tournament itself. If they attack Cho and Luna simultaneously to get Harry's attention divided, then attack him they would have a better chance.