I like your story so far and hope you eventually find time to update it. Best of luck in college, I know that it can be intense and hectic, but I hope that you get everything you wish from the experience. ;)

It WAS kind of offensive. But LOL

This book is really good are you doing anymore chapters for this book please let me know thank you

You're a very bad writer

fantastic chapter!

Excellent update! I'm really enjoying your story! I like the dynamics between the different characters, especially Harry and Daphne.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Das ist für mich fast zu spannend.
Danke für das schreiben.

Interesting story. I'm looking forward to the next update!

So I’ve only read the first chapter but it sounds very analytical please try to put more emotion into your writing other wise it’s great

Interesting take on the second task. I wonder how Dumbledore is taking it that Harry is still not returning to under his thumb? I doubt he realizes just how far along Harry really is and just what controls he has deprived himself of by totally alienating Hermione and Ron from Harry; that's going to come as a rude shock down the way, I'm certain.

Fantastic story!

Please update in the name of your god

Harry should be more angry about the chamber being destroyed.