Reviews for The Captive
uramanasaki-kun chapter 2 . 2/28/2016
what about the rest ! is that all * tears falling *
Amazed chapter 2 . 1/29/2016
This was a really good story
i wish there were a chapter 3
belladu57 chapter 2 . 1/16/2016
Very good
Innocent Law chapter 2 . 9/13/2015
I'm so glad you updated it, the way you ended it feels pretty open ended are you planning on writing more?
AnimeAngel2692 chapter 2 . 9/13/2015
Cool~ update! Awesome chapter. Want more please!
higitsune84tails chapter 1 . 9/11/2015
wah, it's so hot! I want the next chapter! please? :3
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2015
Pls do more :D What will hapened to the captured Law now?

But why did Law suddenly being so affectionate to Doffy? (secretly i wanted Law as an unwilling partner all over until the end :D)
Innocent Law chapter 1 . 8/6/2015
Plz plz plz tell me this isn't a oneshot plz!? I'm sick and need more! Plz
AnimeAngel2692 chapter 1 . 8/6/2015
Wow...just wow. Is it wrong for me to find this good? Then I dont wanna be right. Well done