I personal loved it. It was a bit fast-paced and uneven, but the story was truly heartwarming. I love how you didn't fall victim to the usual "Villager falls in love with _" trope. I'm quite tired of these mediocre-at-best romances, for they have a number of painful cliches. In all I'd give you a 6/10. Try a bit harder, but you have the talent. Keep it up!

I wish you the best of luck! I understand how you feel, I would probably lose my head if it weren't attached lol.
Anyways, good luck!

I see good potential in this story! I can't wait to see what you've got planned!

Hey awesome story! Love it so far

I love it! Keep it coming!