| Reviews for Thank God for Demi-gods |
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Band life chapter 5 . 7/23 I love this keep it up |
Worth1 chapter 5 . 3/23/2016 Hello, can you continue updating? I love your story. I'm waiting |
sbayless44 chapter 4 . 12/26/2015 I enjoyed this chapter, how long until another update? |
GenderbentDragonRider chapter 4 . 9/15/2015 Hey, I really like this story, you should put up the next chapter soon! Can't wait to read more! |
Aviendha Aviendha Aviendha chapter 4 . 9/15/2015 Wow. This is really good. You have an excellent voice, and it is extremely well pictures. It isn't in any way annoying like many are. I have three pieces of advice however - 1) try not to switch between points of view so often, or maybe make them all third person instead of first. Either one, or both. 2) You need to use paragraphs. Remember, a new topic or a new person talking means a new paragraph. 3) You have good grammar and punctuation in general, but you need to learn how dialogue is punctuated. I suggest you look it up or get a beta, unless its all just mistakes, in which case get a beta, edit more, or both. Getting a beta is probably the easiest. That said, this is a really excellent story. It pulled me in so I forgot about the rest of the world. I look forward to the next update. |
Lav da mermaid chapter 1 . 8/27/2015 Where is my Nicky :( |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2015 Hispanic is offensive, use the term latino(boys)/latina(girls)/lantinx(gender neutral) instead. Also try double spacing. But this is a great story. |
Psycho Karma chapter 4 . 8/17/2015 I'm already in love with the story. WANT MORE! Please update soon. |
beazlerat chapter 3 . 8/10/2015 update soon please. |
Axcel chapter 1 . 8/10/2015 I don't think Jarvis would translate ancient Greek. I think modern humanity only knows how to read it, not how to speak it, so Jarvis couldn't. |
ARTwrites chapter 2 . 8/7/2015 Hope you recover the chapter and this is really good! Please continue! |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/6/2015 awssome raly good plot |
sankrisid23 chapter 1 . 8/5/2015 it's REALLY interesting. Keep the chapters coming bro |