I love this keep it up

Hello, can you continue updating? I love your story. I'm waiting

I enjoyed this chapter, how long until another update?

Hey, I really like this story, you should put up the next chapter soon! Can't wait to read more!

Wow. This is really good. You have an excellent voice, and it is extremely well pictures. It isn't in any way annoying like many are. I have three pieces of advice however - 1) try not to switch between points of view so often, or maybe make them all third person instead of first. Either one, or both. 2) You need to use paragraphs. Remember, a new topic or a new person talking means a new paragraph. 3) You have good grammar and punctuation in general, but you need to learn how dialogue is punctuated. I suggest you look it up or get a beta, unless its all just mistakes, in which case get a beta, edit more, or both. Getting a beta is probably the easiest.
That said, this is a really excellent story. It pulled me in so I forgot about the rest of the world. I look forward to the next update.

Where is my Nicky :(

Hispanic is offensive, use the term latino(boys)/latina(girls)/lantinx(gender neutral) instead. Also try double spacing. But this is a great story.

I'm already in love with the story. WANT MORE! Please update soon.

update soon please.

I don't think Jarvis would translate ancient Greek. I think modern humanity only knows how to read it, not how to speak it, so Jarvis couldn't.

Hope you recover the chapter and this is really good! Please continue!

awssome raly good plot

it's REALLY interesting. Keep the chapters coming bro