Love love love this!

Why, oh why, did you not continue this story? Please, please continue it.

Love. Love, love love love love. It gets better and better! And I really like your explanation as to the Tardis' feelings for Jack. That makes SO much more sense, not that she hates him because, like you said, she has bits of herself in him making him immortal! And as much as I love the Doctor, he has his faults and I think he would lie about something like that.

Awww! So glad somebody finally wrote this! And it's so cute!

Good. Keep smiling. :-)

Ah, Lee is understanding that the TARDIS, like him, communicates a little differently, and the TARDIS is understanding of how Lee communicates. Both realize that Donna instinctively understood that, so they appreciate each other and Donna even more. Nicely done!

I'm glad the Doctor gets along with Lee; it would be awfully awkward if there were jealousy between them

Well, Donna's mum would have either just appreciated the fact that Donna brought home a man, or she would have scared the poor soul away!

And now we're on to The Stolen Earth/Journey's End... I hope Donna doesn't have to forget everything, including Lee. It would kill Lee to have to leave her behind.

That was good. Keep smiling. :-)

Lol poor doctor. I like this lol lee wrecking the universe

Poor Doctor, he's a bit of jealous, isn't he? Not sure if he's jealous of Lee (or rather, Donna's affections to Lee) or Donna, though. The TARDIS is treating him like the pouting child he can be... and yes, she does like Donna; Donna shows appreciation to her and probably tries to tell the Doctor not to use the mallet so much on the TARDIS, too!

I would like to see more myself. Keep smiling. :-)

I was not sure how I would like this but after reading it I want more. I want to see were this goes please write more