I loved it! Especially the descriptions. I loved the description of the kiss (is that weird? maybe.)
One of the best Leviathan FanFictions on the site! Gonna read the whole thing.

*screams* This can't be over already! It was sooooooo good. I loved how this continued on from Goliath and I'd love to see this keep going. Their romance is growing so well~

This is a bloody rippa and I hope that it gets finished so me and the lads can see the epic conclusion.
Its truly astounding what a true blue writer like yourself can do once given an epic piece of literature like Leviathan.
Keep up the bloody terrific work!
(also if you did not read this in an ozzie accent then I'll have to sue you for not correctly appropriating my culture)
Regards from Down Under! :)

Amazing buetiful ending.

SEQUEL

It ight

Please continue with the story, it's so close to ending! This was as good as the actually Leviathan series and I beg you to finish this! I read the whole 21 chapters in one day and couldn't stop. This is definitely one of, if not, the best fan fictions of the Leviathan series! I think I'm speaking for a lot of people when I also say this, making a sequel to this story would be fantastic!

That was so so good! And the barking spiders- brilliant! Well done! Ple ase keep it up!

Mr. MachinaEm, I ever so much adore your writing and found myself forgetting that I wasn't reading Westerfeld's work. Your point of view with the characters was straight on. All I can say is this: Please keep writing! More about Deryn and Alek, or maybe your own original series. I shall keep two eyes peeled for your next piece of writing. Thank you!

Lovely as always :) I really liked this chapter a lot. The relationship between Deryn and Alek is always fun to read about. I hope you do write more after this. I'm bad with ideas, but I'm sure I'll love anything you come up with. I will certainly read whatever you put out there.

Glad you're continuing with the story! I've loved Gorgon so far. It's easily been one of the best continuations of the Leviathan trilogy I've read. This chapter was kind of sparse on development, but I'll never complain about more DerynAlek fluff. It was a nice way to ease readers back in after the gap between chapters.

Frankly, I'm not sure where you'll go from here. This felt like a final chapter until the last few lines, and although I won't balk at more content, I'm not sure where the plot could go from here. The Germans have kind of been in the background for much of the plot, so having them fluidly jump into the fray might be tricky to pull off. In any case, I have confidence that you could make it work.

love this story! I only discovered it today, and I have already finished it! Can't wait for more!

Nice chapter. And... oooh, the Germans have the black Star? All of that nice wrapped big up, and you drop that bombshell on us? How are they going to fix that?

And uh... a sequel would be great. You'd have to notify me about it though.

I would totally read it if you wrote more! Your work is amazing! Also, I would like a sequel to this. You are a great author, so please keep up the good work!

Hi I have been with you from your first post of the chapter and have to say it is amazing I have loved every moment of it. This chapter has been quite good but a bit to short no problem though as we have seen some quite active Deryn and Alsk stuff. But loved it anyway. Would definetly read a sequel. Looking forward to the next chapter.