I love your writing style. please keep on going with this story it is great to see Loke's point of view on his exile.

This fic needs more love because it's so well-written! The narration really takes you in and makes you experience how hopeless and miserable Loke must have felt during this moment. Seriously, the narration is so good, if you talked the way that you wrote I would listen to you talk about the weather for hours on end. The fact that it's not even your first language makes it even more impressive! Great job with this fic! :)

This story looks really good so far! I'd really love to see Like throughout his three years in Earthland, before Lucy and the others found out who he was. I can't wait for more!