Love the beginning... Wanna read it all. Any chance of continuing it?

This is soooo good! Love the characterization, and you capture the atmosphere really well. I'm already smiling ear to ear reading this. Gotta see Victoria in his care again. I'm genuinely curious as to whats going to happen next

Interesting read so far, but I wish there was a bit more done with setting the scene. I'm pretty guilty of this too- it's something that is often overlooked. But it does help.

I would also like to know why 47 agreed to this. He's more the 'watch from afar' type. But I'm interested that this story seems to follow Victoria,and NOT 47. I want to see more of this. It's an original perspective with quite a bit of potential. :)

Please continue! This seems promising!

More please!

Seems really nice! Continue please.

This is starting out great! I'd love to see where it goes. :)

You're clearly a talented writer, the description is perfect and so far everybody is in character. I wonder how this'll play out.

The imagery in this is amazing! The plot seems interesting, I'm really looking forward to seeing what will happen with 47 and Victoria. Please update soon :)