| Reviews for The Long Lost Awaited King of Magic |
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   thunderofdeath97 chapter 2 . 9/23 what the fuck bro? |
| Logic Core chapter 2 . 8/4 And another dead fic. Wonderful. |
| Logic Core chapter 1 . 8/4 It is "Magus," not Mageus. And it is civilization. Get a beta, you need one for a few minor mistakes. Also, when a new person speaks, you do not continue the paragraph. One speaker, one paragraph. If Andromeda thinks or you describe and scene and she speaks, then Tonks speaks, you have everyone's favorite pink haired auror speak in a brand new paragraph or sentence. |
| PGHammer chapter 1 . 7/27 Wow. And *whoa* - a true Pleasurable Potter Pillaging - and Harry is the *pillaged*! (Though this is the first fanfic where THE Mistress of Transfiguration is among the pillagers without *magical help*. I have nothing against a HarryMulti with Minerva in it; I've read - and enjoyed - several of them; in fact, I haven't run into a bad one yet. However, this one is TRULY Rare Air: Poppy Pomfrey AND Dora's mom are in it as well. It's Poppy - not Andromeda, that is the shocker - I've read a grand total of ONE other HarryMulti with them both in it.) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/27 This is kind of gross actually "we can't worry about age" okay...also why is it that whenever anyone tries to do a fic where harry is the king or a lord or something he has to have 70 wives, let me tell you I live in Britain and we have had kings and they didn't need that many wives, it's not logical |
| mrhunterjdavis chapter 2 . 7/27 Cool to see this continue. Fun concept |
| Hippo critical chapter 1 . 7/5 Terrible Learn basic English Isn't it ironic |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/2 More more more give me more please update soon |
| Percy Jackson7 chapter 2 . 7/3 I forgot about this story. But can't wait to see more chapters. |
| alice22 chapter 2 . 7/2 Well the 1st chapter was very interesting. Will look forward to the next one. |
| SelenetheNerd chapter 1 . 7/2 Can’t wait to see how this plays out. Nice work |
| Anisabel chapter 1 . 6/4 Please continue your story. I like your story |
| auroracrowmell chapter 1 . 2/9 continua esta muito bom |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2019 Guess an other dead srory and athur. Its sad to see such stories die. |
| capnbooth4 chapter 1 . 6/17/2017 Update soon. Can you make a list of harem members? |
