please come back. i need more Brandi

please for the love of god update this. i need it

Omfg this was awesome, write more plz

Are you going to update? I must know what happens next to Tim and Brandi

I'm really enjoying your story. Please update soon.

More please. In whatever format you want : operetta , Kabuki theatre, improv. Just more,ok?

I tried to post this for 3 so let's see if 2 will take it:I don't know if I'll be allowed to write another review but I had to apologize first. I was half asleep when I write the first one and my brain transplant isn't working too well.
But godamn this is good. Brandi sounds like a real person - a real woman who isn't a 5'1" curvy keg o' dynamite that's gonna take over Eastern Kentucky with her sultry beauty and her ( I'm running out of cliches) um...ability to shoot a lot.

No, she's a real person and we don't even read about her beauty til we're already captivated.
Now I'd write more but either this comment will get rejected cause I already made (an incoherent) one or I'll get cut off. So i am gonna wrap it up and send it to you PM wise.
Your Tim is extremely Tim; very him and very sexy without lots of detail about his bulging biceps; not a lot,of dropped g's and just a real person. (More than on the show actually). Rachel and Art are perfection. I don't quite get Raylan yet, maybe having him in the background is too weird for me:). But I'd love to see what you do with Winona. I was a big fan of hers buts she's thought to write since she's so many shades of gray. (Like "50"? EW!)
Give us more, more Tim and Brandi and their secrets. I just have one neurotic, tiny quibble. I just can't see after having a great night of first time Sex with anyone, especially Tim, that after being told I had "stinky breath ", I would take my clothes and run out the door. (Except it was her place). I've always thought man has to love the woman a little bit more, usually, but starting off something new where he can blithely comment on her foul breath - well, I worry about Brandi. I care about her, even if she is bird dogging my quail. So that's a big thumbs up from me. More again soon and I apologize for being a douche.

She likes Tim more than he likes her. I always think that's a problem because biologically the man has to have a physical reaction when it comes down to a woman would certainly enjoying more if she physically responded but she could still also not feel the magic.i worry about my little Brandi.

And her breath! I'm sure Tim's is a cloud of roses after all the coffe, tension, and alcohol he sucks down every day .

If I didn't love your writing I wouldn't care. Plus, Tim and I were supposed to have our pre-nuptial talk with thrabbi
today and he never showed!

Great story can't wait for more

This is great...I need more...I think you captured the Tim G. we all know and love...like this new character and her situation is intriguing.

T'riffic! Tim is well written and true to charCter

I'm ready for more! Cool to see a woman who is the mirror image of Tim and also refreshing that she doesn't want to rip her clothes off the minute she sees him. Don't get me wrong - I really want both of them to rip their clothes off - together - but it's different to see two characters who don't fall instantly in love/lust, especially when one of those characters is Tim ( I'd fall in love/lust with him at first sight, btw, but I lack originality:) and I'm intrigued by her flinching at the mention of "sniper"( again often times this is part of the he's so dreamy intro for Tim. Again, I think it's dreamy but as I said before, I follow the crowd.) and about her injury .
When will there be more?