Wow, this is really good. I agree, Chloe is quite codependent and Mark did a number on her. Maybe a flash back scene to show how she became that way?

Holy...same thats both hot and super detailed. I love how this really delves into the world and actually educates you on it and shows the right and wrong ways of doing things. I also love how it sort of goes to explain about Domme and Subs a bit so you get an idea of who might fit what mindset. It really makes sense for me as this interests me a little, but I wouldn't even know where to start. I totally hope to see this updated and eventually finished. Please keep up the fantastic work.

This is great story! Too bad our author give up on it! Hello there Bechloes, 2020!

i just love how you explained the thought process of both Beca and Chloe. The switching povs really worked for me because you can definitely see what they were thinking and feeling. you explained so much about the community and the D/s relationships especially at Beca's class, which is wonderful. i wish sheila did not interrupt it lol. i also love how they were able to live their normal lives outside the lifestyle. hoping we could see Chloe work with Robbie, and Chloe and Aubrey and Stacie's friendship develop more. also Chloe coming home to her family and friends, that'd have been great now that she's back at the real world. and i wonder what she'll work as, if she'll get a job again. 'cause she worked in law but her time with robbie and her experiences shows she'll also be great in SpEd.
but ultimately, you just wrote the sharing of trust and vulnerability and care and devotion so beautifully, and the balance of them being D/s and being normal people outside their playroom, it just makes my heart happy. thanks for this work and hope you're keeping safe.

Update this shite please, I've been waiting years

Still to this day my fave fanfics ever! Hope you’re well!x

Good nice

Wow 2 years since you last updated. Hope all is going well with you. You describe the intricacies of the D/s relationship so well. Hope you continue.

Update?

Miss reading this all the time, hope you’re well!

This is beautifully written and you're an excellant writer. I know it's been awhile but could you please continue it?

I’m real proud of you for continuing to write this! It’s still absolutely amazing, I was So happy to see it again and to finally hear about you because I was So worried but don’t ever feel pressured to continue this, you do what you can and let your mind rest. This chapter was real real adoring and amazing, so I’m proud :)

Bud. This is the first time I've read it since you last updated way back, and I still absolutely adore this fic. With all my heart. You are such a talented writer and I honestly think it's beautifully written. The detail is outstanding and the way Beca describes what she does and why she does it... I have no words.

I hope everything is okay; you're amazing.

I'd love to see where you take the fic xx

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I have really enjoyed the story so far, it's a unique take on the Bdsm aspect of a talr. Love the characferisation, it fits exactly with the characters. Hope you are feeling better now than you were when you posted the chapter. Keep up the excellent writing, I hope you will one day continue this.