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   xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 25 . 11/18/2015 This story felt incredibly rushed. For example; when saving her home planet. It's like 'click' it's done. It just gets me wondering why didn't do that in the first place when she had the power to do it. Why did she wait all those years to free her family when she already capable. I think the story would have been better if you just focused on one plot line. You have like 3 or 4 here which in all honestly doesn't make the story very memorable. I would have liked to see character and plot development. Please don't take this as a flame as it is not. I'm just giving you feedback to help you develop your writing a little bit more |
| flo16 chapter 25 . 10/6/2015 Please update all the worst storries are coming but not one good one good one so olease. |
| soniyamalik444 chapter 25 . 9/28/2015 why don't you try wedding in sequel :) it will be great .well I hope so ;) sequel yaaayyyyyy :))))) |
| soniyamalik444 chapter 24 . 9/27/2015 What did I do? well I'm appreciating your story.. I said that something is wrong with musa and yes I'm correct she apologized to become selfish ... I love romance and yes this is romantic story which I loved it if you want me to stop review then fine.. I won't review in your story ..sorry if my comment hurt you ..bye |
| soniyamalik444 chapter 23 . 9/22/2015 I don't find it's funny why they laugh? I think musa became jealous ... if it's not so maybe something's wrong with musa I know she is not like this :( poor flora she is tooo weak and helia is sooooooooo romantic ;) awwww man I love him :'( I want him aaaaaannnnnnn please GOD GIVE ME A BOYFRIEND LIKE HELIA ..AMEN UPDATE SOON :) I LOVE THIS STORY IT'S SOOOO ROMANTIC FORGET ABOUT SECRET I WANT ROMANTIC STORIES :)))) |
| soniyamalik444 chapter 22 . 9/20/2015 well if I'm in flora place I also had nightmares or worst because conjuring is very scary movie ... poor flora hope she will get soon :) update soon |
| badyot chapter 22 . 9/20/2015 Nice chappie~~~ |
| flora.a.bloom chapter 21 . 9/18/2015 OMG Poor flora :( Update soon ~xox |
| soniyamalik444 chapter 21 . 9/18/2015 hallucinating is really that bad? i mean she hear sounds like monsters ... what's wrong with her? and charming helia :) Update soon :* |
| flora.a.bloom chapter 20 . 9/18/2015 WHHHHHHHYYYYY! WHYYYYY ARE FLORA AND HELIA SOOO CUTE WHHHHYYYYY they make me jealous XD ANYWAYS update soon And hope u get bettter soon ;) ~xox |
| soniyamalik444 chapter 20 . 9/14/2015 nice chapter update soon :) |
| soniyamalik444 chapter 19 . 9/9/2015 How you made helia so romantic and caring.. sometimes i fell jealous from flora :( huh... he loves flora so much gives up his title that's a bold thing not everyone does that wonderful chapter please update soon :) |
| flora.a.bloom chapter 19 . 9/9/2015 Awwwww I love the connection between theses two Its soooooooo... Special I wish there are guys as sweet as helia in reality XD Amywaysssss Update sooonn ~xox |
| soniyamalik444 chapter 18 . 9/7/2015 it's ok and I'm the person who asked you my name is SONI :) well thanks for your feedback here ... wonderful chapter i love it .. i really love them :) thank you for the story :* . update soon ;) |
| flora.a.bloom chapter 18 . 9/6/2015 Awwwwwwww Nice chappie Update soon ~xox |
