pritty bad move here, even merakle won't be that silly.

All magical Britain have at least 15.000 thousands magicals ,where did you find so many people for the order and the Deatheaters ?
Also we didn't get to see the progresion of harry so how the fuck did he stand against Voldemort ?
And you do know about non verbal casting ,right ?
so why did most of your fights have people screaming the spell ?!

Thank's for the cite, I read it about A THOUSAND TIMES and also, to admit it, HARRY POTTER IS THE BEST!

I have read your story till the part where he gets inheritance test done. and frankly I find this story a horrible one. without any sense of actual thinking gone into it. I hope you never update this story instead give it a thought and restart it. good luck

Just Sad. Yeah, apt.

Amelia cheating on him with Sirius? Really? That just put the nail on the coffin for me. That trash comes in at number #2 on what ruin novels the most for me, rape being #1.

And of course, next chapter you have the "classic" dream sequence where Susan tells Amelia how much of a mistake that was. Oh, and let's not forget forgiving Sirius later. Sorry, no one who's ever been in a relationship would EVER forgive that, ESPECIALLY if it was "family" .

Yup, absolutely trash. Novel went from 4/5 to wishing I could wipe my mind like Men in Black. Thanks for doing what I'm assuming you thought would be "great" drama. Amazing decision.

The order has NEVER had 200 members or even close to it. Maybe, *maybe* in the first war they might've had 50 plus, but back then the aurors admitted LV was around, so maybe not. In the second war the order had maybe 30 members all told, certainly less than 50.

The whole setup wasn't good, at all.

C'est extrêmement mal écrit et franchement il vient de sortir de prison le matin il ne pouvait même pas se lever et le voici qui est prêt à partir fait bataille contre Voldemort c'est un peu n'importe quoi

I can't believe that some moron here are have so much time to read this pathetic pice of shit story and appreciating it , will they do the same if it was harry cheating on Amelia ? I doubt that such shameless morons and glad harry died in the end I would rather die than being with a slut like Amelia

I just want to ask how u find in Urself to write such ridiculous story if I was harry I would rather die than be with someone who cheated on me but I guess u must be a looser like this harry in fan fiction a doorman or bitch like Amelia for writing such crap and having harry and Amelia pairing

Posting this review before reading chapter 2-15.
While lightly disappointed with Sirius in chapter 1, the author's note at the start of the second WILL keep me reading this fic.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and enjoyed it a lot.

Pls new ending

You know... I didn't read the story... well I skimmed through C-15... curiosity mostly... anyways the reason I'm glad I didn't read this is because I highly dislike story's where the main character doesn't get a happy ending... especially when that MC is Harry Potter... unless the sequel to this had Harry somehow coming back to life or something I really can't see myself ever reading this... although idk if I could read this even if he came back if he stayed with her... since from my understanding she apparently cheated on him with his godfather... Yeah no...

Anyways idk why I wrote this... I guess I just felt I needed to...

Adventure/Romance, yea... NO Sad fraking Tragedy more like. Nice fights though.

Hope sirius and Amelia die of painful std's.