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You are a girl not a boy. Boys don't have cunts.

Wow, Kojima, a little harsh to threaten to stab a guy in the neck just because he won't tell you what he's laughing about, don't you think?

Also, if they weren't supposed to be there on Sunday, why were they there in the first place?

Otherwise, interesting chapter. Regarding your AN, though, I have a few comments:

- First of all, please don't delete or replace what you have here so far, even though you're starting it over. You can just publish a new story with the second version and keep this one the way it is.

- What 'championship' were you referring to? Some kind of sport?

- It's funny that you planned to have Junji become Prime Minister, because for the epilogue of CTT, I actually plan to give that position to Minako (yeah, spoiler, but that chapter will be years away at this rate)

- Thanks for the shoutout and compliments, I'm glad to know I could help improve your writing

Looking forward to the reboot!

Like I said earlier, I really like the romance scenes here, they flow very naturally. For that last part, it says three but you listed four, was that intentional? I am curious to see what Chitose is doing, so keep up the good work.

Well, that could certainly explain Kaede's death, as well as the demise of Angelic Layer's popularity.

Confusing in places, but a good story.

Very good but sad chapter, you captured the emotions and tragedy well.

I have a few questions, though. First of all, I might have forgotten something, but did Kojima's mom really perfect AI technology?

Also, your character profile says Kotoko is a laptop persocom, but in your story she's an A.A.I. which are apparently different

I'm also curious about what happened to Anii, where is she in the present time?

I see you changed some things since the last draft I saw. Sorry I wasn't able to review your most recent draft, but I've been really busy lately.

As for the chapter, I like how you delved into Kojima and Kotoko's history. I would question the logic of certain parts of her construction the way you described it, though (for instance, cutting and glueing the skin together would make it look very haphazard, full of seams and such, and it doesn't account for the tactile sensors she must have on her skin - you even referenced her sense of touch and temperature in the chapter).

I also see that you changed the original Star Wars movie reference to a live action PMMM movie, although that didn't address my main complaint in the original draft - it makes no sense for a movie to be released a year early with no advance notice. I also kind of miss the cute scene with the Star Wars parody dialogue you had in the original draft.

Those are really just minor complaints, though. Overall the chapter was excellent. I look forward to seeing more of your version of Kojima and Kotoko's history. I'd also like to learn more about Anii - like seeing when she was first built and activated and more about her relationship with Kojima's family. Where is she now, for instance? (Unless you addressed that already and I forgot).

Don't worry about taking so long to update, it happens to all of us sometimes. Keep up the great work - your writing has been steadily improving since you began this story.

I'll hopefully have my next chapter out soon too, so be on the lookout for it.

Looks like it's off to a good start. A bit of grammar brokenness, but can still tell what's going on. They sound like party people, Koj and his friends.

I'm not going to reiterate the things I said about the beta versions of this chapter; instead I'll just say that, despite the several logical problems and such I still enjoyed it. I found the romance to be sweet and not cheesy, and the dream to be ominous and mysterious. Although regarding your AN, Kojima isn't your own character, he's a canon character, so I don't know what you were really talking about there.

Anyway, keep up the good work.

What can I say? Great chapter, although it could have been longer. Thanks for the acknowledgment as well. Also I'm looking forward to the character profiles.

This chapter is a bit confusing. The character interactions were pretty good (although I'd like to see a few scenes between Kotoko and Mika, maybe they could develop a similar relationship as she had with Sumomo). However, I'm finding it difficult to keep track of all the characters; there were several in this chapter that I didn't recognize. perhaps a brief list and description of all of the characters would help?

Kyono seems like a real psycho, I keep wondering how he got this way. Of course it he hurts Junji, Minako will probably do worse to him than what Kojima did. Speaking of that couple, if Annai and Kojima are bullied for their relationship, maybe they can go to them for support. Junji is a psychologist, after all.

Keep writing and don't get discouraged!

BTW, my next chapter should be out relatively soon.

Nice and extensive chapter; I have several comments.

First of all, I don't really understand the test thing towards the beginning. The flight attendants on the plane made everyone touch a chemical that damages electrical devices, instead of asking passengers to deactivate their persocoms? That makes no sense.

I do like his you wrote the character interactions and dialogue between Kojima and his 'coms, it was very well-done.

I'd still like to hear more backstory on the killer though, as what little you revealed about him raised more questions than answers.

I think the scene with Junji and Minako was excellently done, you captured their dynamic and personalities well. In fact the most OOC thing was probably Minako's username; she would more likely have picked something more pretentious and formal, but of course you can do what you want since this is your fic, it's not a big deal.

I found it a bit unbelievable that Annai would so quickly take Kojima's words at face value when she knows that he doesn't want to admit to liking her. Breaking down over that seemed rather an overreaction, I thought she was smarter than that.

The ending scenes were quite mysterious; it seems you're implying there's another persocom out there with a program like Chi's, but what is its purpose and why did it activate? If that was already explained then it was unclear.

I appreciate the shoutout and I'm greatly looking forward to part 2.

Wow, sorry to hear that. I hope your computer is fixed and you return soon.

Quite a shocking development here... are you going to elaborate more on the background of this guy and why he's so crazy?

BTW, I updated CTT as well, so please read and review it if you have the time.

Pretty good chapter, even if there are some concerns with the timeline. The kiss was sweet (both of them, in fact), and was Miku's appearance as a persocom inspired by webidolchiu94's fic? I'm also worried about what will happen to Yuzuki and Tokyo Rose now.

BTW I'm working on my next chapter, I hope to have it out before Christmas, but I can't guarantee that. Still, the writing process has begun. Keep up the good work.