Ah finally next is the chapter i have been waiting for.

I like how Gideon has become more of a threat in this version due to still having the amulet and its power's, it makes him still feel dangerous even when dealing with people who can use magic. Not much else to say on this chapter other then stuff that has to do with my opinion about the original episode.

Also i forgot to bring this up last chapter but i will say that it was interesting that the random sword Rumble found actually has a purpose other then being a joke this time around.

While i can understand Erza not wanting Dipper to use deadly weapons in a fight with a bully, i still disagree with her over all view point on the matter of the fight (mainly her comparing this to Natsu and Gray's fights) since in all truth i really can't see Robbie as much more then a jerk who is so insecure that he treats a kid with a crush as a credible threat.

Well at least you changed up some of the show's events, though it amazes me that how many different bad things kept happening to Wendy, it is sad that their was apparently still no way for both Wendy avoiding harm (both now and in dating Robbie) and Mable getting her pet pig.

You know that part with Waddles and Pacifica really doesn't make any sense, both as to why she would want to win a pig (or a chicken) and why Waddles freaked out when she won him.

By the way nice foreshadowing for latter on.

Finally some one changes the ending so Dipper doesn't just give away all his evidence, i am shocked at how few writers ever think to change that despite giving away those documents being one of the dumbest things he could of done.

I was a bit surprised of how easily Erza surrendered but i do understand he reasoning for doing so, after all it would be bad if she was found to be from another world. I wonder how much Quentin's proclamation that anyone from Earthland will be considered citizens will hold up.

Not much to say here other then Mable using her magic for the song number was a nice touch, too bad it didn't help in the end. . . well maybe not knowing what Pacifica's parents are like.
It was nice to see at least one of Dipper's clones side with him and try to help, though it didn't change much, it is still the thought that counts.

Interesting use of MLP in this, i honestly didn't expect that.

Yeah that last line before the next time pretty much sums up the biggest problem many people had with Mable in the latter part of season 2.

The whole part with Manly Dan liking Erza was a pretty interesting change to the normal formula, and a bit of a ironic one, but it was good to see Erza letting Dan down gently.
I also like how you had Dipper challenge his mother to the manliness tester, his resulting embarrassment feels a bit less mean spirited then. As for Dipper and the Manotaur's part of the story, not much has changed but at least you managed to explain how Dipper suddenly had the skills to fight multi bear with a spear.

Well that was interesting, so Mabel ended up on Earhtland huh? and during a important event at that, despite Erza having been on Earth for at least thirteen years, strange.

Too bad Dipper didn't phone in for help when he had the chance, but then again it might not of helped since they where dealing with ghosts, either way at least Erza got to enjoy her evening by laughing at Stan's reaction to that movie.

Ah good to see that things are really beginning to change from canon, it will be interesting to see the ramifications of Gideon still having his magic amulet, both due to him still having powers, and the corruption effect it is suppose to have on the user (physical copy of Journal 3 info).

Honestly i like that the twins like strawberry cake like their mother, its a nice family trait, and something they can share with her, i also like Dipper learning some swordsmanship from his mother, though it will probably take a while before he gets good at it.

Toby really must of wanted that phone number, considering the pain he is in for if Erza ever realizes he was part in Gideon's scheme.

Huh so Erza knows about Stan really being Stanley pines and not his brother Stanford, interesting, either way it was nice to see Erza join in helping her kids, both in the case and protecting them from Blubs and Durland's mockery.

To be fair to Blubs and most of the other police officers of Gravity Falls, they are probably repeat victims of the Blind Eye's mind erasing, so most of the incomitance we see in the show was probably brought on by the damage that did to their minds.

Pretty much like in the show really, though i did like the new cuts to Erza's house hunting venture, and Mabel using her magic to change to the lightbulb sweeter, which finally gives it (the sweeter) a good use. I also liked how Erza forbade her kids from "cheating" at the contest by using their power's, thus cutting out the simple solution for winning the money.
Though to be fair since Dipper never thought to cheat the contest by using the pictures he had of McGucket's robot, even in the show, then i am pretty sure their was a low change of cheating anyways. . . then again he might of tried loophole abuse to rationalize it.

It is a bit strange that Erza's realtor seemed to not have a bigger reaction to all the strange stuff they encountered (at least what didn't put her in imitate danger) but then again she must of been encountering all sorts of strange things while selling houses in Gravity Fall's.

Interesting idea for a story, though i will admit that if i hadn't seen the page for this on TV tropes i might never of stopped by to take a look. It is a good thing i did because i am liking this story so far.

I am excited to see where this story goes and while i do know some of the things that will be coming up in latter chapters (and even read a couple season 2 chapters early. ) i still do really want to see where you go with this story.

That all said i would like to say this once but you might want to have a beta reader comb though these chapters for you as i did notice some mistakes, mostly spelling (at one point you misspelled Dipper as Sipper) and i will say that it even took me out of the story a couple times.

Anyways this was a strong first chapter and though i am a bit surprised that the gnomes gave Erza that much trouble, but it isn't the first time i have seen a story give them a resistance to magic, i just hope none of them bit her, knowing the curse that causes. but regardless i am liking this so far and i am excited to read onward.

Have Mabel learn Yarn make magic, with magic yarn that has different effects, like fire proof and stuff

...can a random Exceed show up and team up with Dipper

I just realized Stan's problem with the wax stans 'death' reminded him of his twin disappearing into the portal

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