Just my opinion, I believe the it needs more gay. Like a shit ton of gay. Smut maybe?

A really nice slice-of-life fic. Even the gay thing looks justified enough to me.
The dialogs are well handled and feel natural, the descriptions are precise yet easy to follow, so one can imagine the scene with no efforts. Your story just got faved!

Good job mate.

I absolutely love the relationship that these two have in-canon, and you made it just that much richer. It felt heartfelt and sincere, and I definitely appreciate that.

I also appreciate the gay. Always down for the gay.