Not understanding why your so in to torturing Peter so much? Not sure I'll read the next one.

Clint's daughter or not there would be no ending to this story that didn't have Lila spending some serious time in jail.

So is Lila really Hawkeye's daughter?

Since when has Felicia ever been a brunette?

This story is turning into one giant convoluted mess.

Peter needs to understand that this isn't going to have a happy ending

I'm in agreement with Peter, she had no right no matter how she justified it to herself keeping that info from him.

I think you've drug out who this HER character is about as long as you can

I would most certainly try to find some way to take Andrew's powers away permanitely, after killing someone like he did you don't get to say your sorry and continue on like nothing happened.

For someone who's as smart as Peter is you made him seem like a dummy in this chapter

Andrew is a little bratty asshole

If I was Pete I would have one of my science friends help me create some kind of formula that would suppress their powers until they are adults.

Oooh, you should really do the trilogy. Actually, you have to now, or I would kill you. Especially after that epilogue. You should either start it off with or do a one-shot of the whole family doing a regular activity. It'll be so fun.
Write.
Excelsior!

ah def don't like the fact that you made mj this super villain. i mean it was cool at first but now it's permanent? nah.

Ah hell. Peter is not going to like going against MJ