Man what a ride this was lol. Definitely will read the next story now lol.

the dialogue at the begining was one that would be better for 'older versions' since a kid should not talk so formally, typing mistakes, short and simple words woul work better and you could have even added 'trembling' because of cold, nerves and distrust of meeting a stranger after such a 'tragedy'

wisdom and insigh only comes with age, you wrote as if they were short oldmen doing LARP rather than 'inocent' little kids without worldly experience... unless they were reincarnators wanting to look like kids to other reincaranators without knowing that the others were also reincarnators

oof, I was thinking that this story would be all right-turns out I was wrong

Wait is Wave dead?

This story is so beautiful i cried but why did they have to die in the end this was the most saddest and honorable ending i have read and this story was amazing thank you for writing i enjoyed reading it. Please continue to write as many as possible.

So cringeworthy

Interesting premise, well executed. A little work could be used on grammar, but it's only minor.

Intriguing story. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

MasterMind2553

Good luck night raid

Well they got off by the skin of their teeth

Dam that was close

Well every guy has that tatsumi. Well almost every guy

Wow what strange way to end that guy

Dam nice trump card

Oh shit looks like tatsumi pass out

Good luck tatsumi