make some romance between jinx and seemore

Okay, this could become a lot of different things from this start.
Maybe the Academy doors and walls resist but can't quite stop teleportation. So Wykkyd can get through but only with great difficulty and Jinx can sense the slow change in the density of the air in the room that accompanies his stressful teleports. The doors and walls at the Academy are made that way because the staff didn't want students just up an leaving on a teleporting whim.
Jinx and Wykkyd? Viewers can't help but notice how the poor guy doesn't speak. But I bet a smart, intuitive team member like Jinx would be able to communicate with him just fine. You might be able to have some fun with it, with how completely at ease they are communicating without his using a word. Jinx says something. Wykkyd gives the slightest raise of an eyebrow. Jinx says, "Well, sure, that might work, too. But what if we overloaded the circuits?" Wykkyd gives the tiniest raise of the other eyebrow. Jinx infers another two sentences worth of information from that and, of course, being Jinx, she's exactly right. Instead of difficulty communicating show them doing so with ease and even Wykkyd making jokes with just a look from his eyes.

Awww. Jinx feels protective toward Mammoth.
This is a nice chapter.
But you've really got to fix all the inconsistencies. Read the chapter out loud once before posting.

Perfection. True perfection.

I liked the interaction between Jinx and shy See-more.
There's almost no limit to what writers can do with these little slice of life at the Academy pieces.

Aw, Jinx being protective of her little teammate. That was nice.

Still a few too many little errors like ". . The sound of stacked pages made the walls shook . . .".
Stacked pages? Shook and not shake?

I know, small stuff, but if you put enough grains of sand in the literary gears the whole thing moves forward more slowly no matter how small those individual grains are.

I have Always searched for a story like this! it's awesome!

Thank u for reviewing. I figured there would be a few errors in this story '

This is fine, just a couple word and verb tense errors but a little more sort of meta content might help. By that I mean, not just a literal recounting of their meeting but at least some hint of the philosophical difference between Jinx and the other HIVE students.

I like the concept. Your execution of it is mostly good but you do have just a couple wrong words and little errors that detract from the smooth flow. Still, this is interesting.