This is unacceptable.
You must give them a happy ending! Please! *looks down* He just wanted to see his smile again...

this is my new head cannon. I love you and your stories so much, thank you.

I'm glad you don't make zeref feel evil and actually look over his little brother. I thing this was cute and sad at the same time.

you should done where Zeref sees Natsu with his own family but Zeref Cultists kidnap their child and Zeref goes to rescue his niece/nephew

That was sweet.

Great Story.
Help me, I'm feeling.

*crack* something inside me just broke...T_T

For you first story i am inpressed. This was very emotional. I cried.

I loved it! I would recommend one line summaries for funny stories.

Search 'Summary help' into google. It takes a while to learn how to perfectly summarize your story, which btw is awesome!

Please don't be discouraged! :) Yoyre an excellent writer!

I cried... Natsu knew he was going to die so he sent Zeref out so he wouldn't see. And Zeref watching over his little brother like that! Seriously, Zeref should get the best big brother award.

My tears! T_T

I love this fanfic.