Are you finishing this? Just wondering . . . .

I do apologize for my tardiness with this review, I truly have been looking forward to reading more of your story!

While not much time may have passed this chapter (it seems like it may have just been a couple of hours at most) quite a bit happened for the characters. Perhaps I'm saying this a bit prematurely, but I'm already enjoying the interaction between Zelda and Link! It was very charming, considering the serious situation.

Also, I like what you did with Zelda's internal struggle. Logically, the previous night she wouldn't have had time to think about it, given the late hour and sudden urgency. But giving her time to think about the situation really begins to show us who she is as a character. The desire for order is perfectly (hah, or maybe IMperfectly) juxtaposed with a messy amnesiac.

In the interest of full honesty, I have yet to form an opinion of Maudette. So far she's just an obstacle in helping Link, but I'm looking forward to what you do with her later!

The story is a great mixture of passively charming and grippingly serious! I eagerly await your next chapter!

An amazing chapter I'm exited to read the next!

I was just wondering what everyone's age is so if u could answer that question that would be great, love this chapter and I'm so exited to read what you have planned!

I loved the ending 3

Well. I must say, I am very impressed with what you have managed to write. Very good writing, no typos or errors that I could find. Your characters are also beautifully written. I hope this develops into something good!

Interesting. :)

Hello! I go by Just-AWESOME-old-me, and so far, man, this story's got me excited!

Ugh, you had me at, “claiming he was being followed.” Wow. Just . . . wow. I'm amazed. You somehow got me completely and utterly hooked before the story even started. Even before I read the first word of the first chapter, I was disappointed that you'd only put up two chapters. Is that weird? xD

Once again, I'm excited! :D Oh, what will this story turn into? Maybe Zelda will run away with Link, after noticing her own set of sacred triangles on her hand, or perhaps she'll keep Link with her. If the run-away-thing happens, then maybe there'd be a sub-conflict where they not only have to avoid Link's follower, but the police (who would be looking for Zelda, as she does seem to have a rich father. But does he care enough to waste money? Maybe he'd do it for publicity). This can go anywhere, and I love that!

Just one, itty-bitty question. I'm confused on how old they are. At first, I imagined them as kids, but with Zelda's vast knowledge with medicine makes that impossible. Sooo, 16ish? 17? Just a minor detail.

Anyways, I can't wait for more! I'll be back the moment you press that publish button! I swear! ;) So, see you then!

~~Me

This is very well written! Sincerely!

You start it off by throwing us right into the action! The manner in which you present the serenity of the night and candle is calming, then immediately take it away with the unexpected guest, I'm assuming to be Link. The switch goes smoothly, thanks to the way you portrayed Zelda's panic. Going from option to option, because she isn't sure what to do is both logical and relatable. Somebody shows up bloody at your door, what the hell do you do?!

Hah, one thing I'm particular, for lack of a better term, grateful for is that you don't waste your time with descriptions. Obviously, they're important, and you certainly don't omit descriptions themselves, but you didn't say more than what was necessary. You didn't go to great lengths to describe the color of Zelda's nightgown, which I appreciate, because some authors tend to drone on about that stuff, and it really doesn't matter to the story. Whereas your set up, talking about the candle was a great way to set the scene. Short and well-described.

Needless to say, I'm very eagerly awaiting your next chapter!

I have to admit, it leaves me torn. Part of me is really excited to watch it unfold from the beginning, but another part of me wishes I had found it midway or when t had already ended, so I could binge read the story in one sitting!

Lovely! I can't wait for the next chapter!