I really like this story and the way you portray Hannibal

Well done. I loved it. As weird as that is, because you've just detailed murders to me. I choose to ignore that and instead congratulate you on your awesome writing skills. Thank you.

You sly dog. Well done. Thanks.

Well done. Loving Will's little comments. he and I are a fair amount alike, so I do find myself going, 'just sneak out, go home, curl up with your dogs'. Really enjoying this. Ta.

Stop. We shouldn't be endorsing murder. It's... you don't kill people. Urgh. I really enjoyed this, and I really enjoyed how you combined the conversation, the murder, the everything in this chapter. Very well done.

Haha. Murder husbands. Lovely. Well-written. You've got the characterisation down pat. Thanks.

Wow. Just... Well done. Beautifully written. Thanks.

I am really, really, really enjoying this. Although, yes, I am doing that thing where I mentally scream at a fictional character to stop being such an idiot. Jeez Will Graham, for someone so perceptive, you can be unbelievably dense. I love your writing style. It's fascinating, and engaging and evocative. Your portrayal of Hannibal through flashes is very clever, and then you subtle descriptions once Will actually meets him is awesome. Thank you.

And the moral (if there is one) of this story is, always be polite. After all the rude do not always have a happy ending. But at least Abigail, Will and Hannibal do.

awww that was amazing! and yummy~ I loved it

My dark sense of humor is welling up at this and I am finding it beautiful. Thank you. :-)

Not to mention it's so much easier to move if one is not on the run. Especially if is the two of them, Abigail and seven assorted mutts. Not being wanted and needing all those fake ID's. The only PO-ed person than would be Jack. I've always though that Hannibal would be to smart to get caught.

Hannibal does so like to watch others play. Until they go after him that is. Will needs to get used to things more he'll be happier in the end.

I LOVE HOW HANNIBAL SHOW OFF HIS WILL LOL

Lyk, "See this cute puppy I have here? He's my soulmate bitches. Back off, he's mine."

LOLOLOLOL

Okay time to play with Tobias. I really like the scenes where Hanni fights with Tobby bc HE'S DAMN HOT WITH HIS SUIT GETTING TATTERED. Do we have those scenes in the next chapter? Or even better Will joins the fight. CAN'T WAIT!

New updates make me excited. Soulmate-murder-husbands are what everyone needs in life. That, and cookies. Great update!