Please write more.
that's all I have to say.
-Ghost

Good job. You don’t have to make obsessed characters overly crazy. In fact having them be less crazy actually makes for a better story in my opinion.

Glad to see that your fanfiction account that your Brother changed forever somehow managed to work just so you could post this story. We noticed and we laughed.

-Love always, Your friends at the Total Drama Writers Forum.

I rather liked this. Granted it was a bit too steamy for Teen rating, but overall not bad. You have a few grammar errors though, specifically in the first paragraph.

I thought this was a cute one-shot. I don't know how good you imagined it to be, but I felt like it was still good. I like Robin x Tharja (honestly I like Robin x most of the girls), and I think you captured the feel of Tharja's character: how she can be scary and mean to most people but become completely different for Robin. I think she's adorable.

The downside to one-shots is that it leaves the reader wanting more. Or at least, I want more!