Thanks for the update. I'm glad you're in a better place.

Well well...I had wondered about this fic a few days ago when I had the sudden urge to read some star wars stories. Probably already said this but I really liked this one, it was quite interesting to read.
So as long as you're feeling up to it, I'll be eagerly waiting for the "enhanced" version. :D

*Ahem* sorry for the delay, got lazy about reading stuff again.

Now, this was a funny chapter. Jake seems like a good partner for Quinn right now.
The fact that some annoying guy can get under his skin so easily puts Starkiller more into the "normal thinking person" light than the "evil asshole" one, wich is pretty good.

This chapter also got me a bit confused. Due to her reaction to Quinn's departure I thought she was the one who like him...but it's the other way around? Weird.

Also, quick question. I don't remember if anything was said about him before or not, but is Darth Maul even a thing in this? Maybe as an enforcer like Mara and Quinn or one those Inquisitors guys, since Ani's already sitting in the apprentice Sith Lord chair.

Two little things though: 1) try to give a little more life to the places where stuff is happening instead of just focusing on said stuff; 2) Seems to be a recurring typo, it's Council not "counsel".

Anyway, a good chapter. Do keep them coming alright?
Also, happy that my reviews are positive for you :D

I wonder where qui gon gonna go to naboo or to corasaunt! Wonder what gonna happen to obi wan when he reaches Kamino! Wonder how anakin and padme relationship gonna happen! I can't wait to read the chapter of anakin and padme! Please update as soon as possible! Wonder if anakin set up the whole thing so he can have time with padme! Love the story please update as soon as possible !

Alright enough of me being lazy...
So I've decided to catch up to your story and I have to say these have been pretty good chapters.

I have to say, I quite like the care you've put into what is your 'main cast'. The interactions between them is currently the highlight in this fic, at least to me, before shit starts to go down.
Couldn't help but laugh at the atmosphere you created at the end of this chapter either, just brilliant. :)

Great work!

Interesting start. This might be one of the best AU stories I ever read :D I will definitely read it further :)

Please continue this story. It's good. Thank you.

O.O General Grievous? I hope he's not going to end up like an annoying caughing robot! :P Good Job, friend! Looking forward to the next chapter :D

Great chapter dear! :D I'm not much of an Anidala shipper but this I really like :D Good job!

Hi its chii
So quinn be the general grievous, don't see that coming. He really is more evil than mara and anakin, isn't he?

Btw the name of zarek remind me of tom zarek from battle star of galactic, lol. Let see will he able to charm padme? She is a hard one.

Well, this is as AU as an AU can be...and I freaking love it!

It's interesting that while they are supposed to be "evil" the only thing that we've seen that can be considered evil is Quinn using and them murdering his "wife".
That's a nice way of accommodanting us before you start to make shit hit the fan. :)

About this chapter...why do I feel like the guy Jade is going to be finding for Padme is Anakin?

Anyway, I could try and say a lot more stuff about why I like your story, but I'm not good with this and also pretty damn lazy...
So...yeah, you have one great story going on here. Keep it up. Please.

Interesting story so far.
Keep it up. Laters.

Ow mara good job. i can't wait to know whose gonna go on date with padme. And cant wait to know anakin's reaction when he saw padme with another man, will be interesting to read ;)

Great chapter! Can't wait to see who padme eat with! Can't wait for what to come! Please update as soon as possible :)