Amazing chapter!

Psssh... Nothin Personnel... Kid...

Oh wonderful, I really do enjoy a story about how you'll win over the heart of a character that every other OC on the planet is already paired up with.

Look, here's the thing. We the audience don't want to read about you. We don't care about you. We care about the RV cast. If your story isn't based on them why would care about your story? And don't say, "Well... um uh mizore is in it!" Because she doesn't even act how she does in the manga or anime. All the sentences are rather cringey as well.

looking forward to more.

More chapters!

a rewrite of crap is more like it

Nice a bit short but a good start keep it up.