awwwWWWW THIS WAS REALLY CUTEEEE! and super sad too. now I wish even more that they hugged it out at the beginning.

WHERE'S FORD THE HUG MONSTER WHEN YOU NEED HIM

I've been meaning to read some of your other stories after finishing Flat Dreams and I'm not disappointed after reading this one! Superb! :D

Awww! ...And also...
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep... NO. Absolutely not. If you'd ended the story without making that first part a dream, I think I would have started mangling the nearest object with my teeth while punching myself repeatedly while yelling crazy things about the "unbearable feels" and "evil authors."
Or, in other words, you did a WONDERFUL job of making that part absolutely heart-wrenching! Wow! You've got a good voice, and the description of Dipper's reaction was spot-on.
I LOVED that fic! I really hope you keep on writing, because I can't wait to see what else you do!

Aww, I loved this so much. Stan's bond with the twins is one of my favourite aspects of the show, and this captures it really well. Good job.

Cutest fic I've read in a long time. I love the flashback lines. Keep up the good work!

-SJ6

Omg. I've been searching for some Mabel and Grunkle Stan family fluff and yours is just perfect. Thank you!

Aw, this was so sweet!

Man, I was getting worried at the beginning, there. I should have known better, though. Strangely enough I just read a story that had a very similar beginning, dream that looks like reality, wake up, check on twins, etc. Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me! :D

I like the premise of this story and the way you put it together. The nightmare is actually making sense, considering the final of "Not What He Seems" and I love the usage of lines from "A Tale Of Two Stans".

And the ending of this fic was so sweet.

This was so so sweet:)

*is now a gnome and is barfing rainbows and glitter* this is officially the best Gravity Falls fic I've read. It was perfect!

It's all perfect. This is perfect. Thank you for writing this!

YEEEESSSS! This is the fan fiction I wanted to read after TOTS! This is the story I've been looking for! Thank you so much for writing this masterpiece, it was a stellar read. :D

I love this! Short and sweet. Amazing!

DA FEELS IN DA BEGINNING DOE! ;.;