interesting if short lived

I particularly enjoyed the way Eidolon ripped into Taylor here. Really uncommon.

Quite interesting. This is why you dont want to provoke a powerhouse into taking you and fighting you seriously.

Liked it.

Taylor, stupid little hypocrite. The entire world of Worm is one disgusting hypocrisy. It should be tortured and purged, cleansed of all its idiocies. And the band of Taylor, and herself especially should be subjected to mind shattering emotional pain.

Hmm, I do believe this is the first story I've read and the focus wasn't on Taylor, or at least not have her as a supporting character. Though this is the first chapter so you might do something else, I'll be looking forward to seeing which direction this takes.

Taylor really should have responded to that Tirade with something like well if she hadn't convinced me she had killed one of my friends for kicks I wouldn't have she brought it down on herself.

I've been trying for a day or two to think of something to write in a review, and just can't come up with anything. The story was decently written for what it is, a variant take on a canon scene. Spelling and grammar and such are excellent and there's nothing to point to and say "this is wrong!" Nevertheless, I don't care for the story. Maybe it's just because I don't care for the main character, whether canon or here. Regardless, keep writing. What you wrote here is better than the vast majority of the work on FFN - and that should be taken as a straight compliment, not as "damning with faint praise", heh.

Killing Manton is something I bet the Triumverate wanted to do for so long, if it wasn't for Contessa's vague incomplete path which needed the S9 around and reducing the number of capes and lessening the number of people actually willing to fight Scion