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explodoboy chapter 1 . 11/27/2015 OC Unobtanium 50000 Years Old 6 Meters tall, Gem on shoulder, More Thin, Has a 3rd, Pink Crystal Arm. Male Greatsword - Pink Prediction Evasion - Can evade future vision with ease. Commander of Yellow Diamond The gem is known for being just a "Ticket" For diamond authority. He just did nearly nothing, Defended insanely. Never allowed to exit Homeworld. He is a "Defective" and he Hates the title. He does not want to be labeled. So he sneaks into a gem mission, to earth. He does not know anything about the mission except that it's a Scouting Mission. He is EXTREMELY Brave. And protective, and will do his BEST to help everyone. Even getting his gem cracked sometimes. He enjoys eating food, Enjoys fusion, Loves stealth. He hates that pearls are considered servants, Hates amethyst's. His gem is 10000x more fragile, But can slowly regenerate. And has a permanent physical form. I do not have skype. PM Me for my Email Adress. Talk to me via Google Hangouts. I am active very often. |
Cartoon Warrior chapter 2 . 11/26/2015 Hello! Just wanted to post my OC here, but I also posted it on your forum: [Name/Gem name]: Citrine [Gem Position]: Neck (If taken, then right ankle) [Age]: 3,007; Looks 16 [Appearance]: Citrine is around seven feet tall, with orange eyes and golden hair. Her skin tone is peach, and she has a gold tattoo that looks like skinny waves that goes from her back to along her arms. (Though she is constantly made fun of because of them.) She wears a yellow blouse, with orange lacing and ribbons, as well as a dark orange skirt with a matching headband. She has gold flats with yellow stars on them. Her hair is pulled back into two braided ponytails, with both have gold ribbons in them. Her gender is female. [Personality]: Citrine is very passionate for others and is often willing to please just about anybody to feel accomplished. She is very competitive, and will never think about giving up unless she is very weak or on the verge of retreating into her gem. She is very loyal, and willing to keep secrets, as well as keeping of few of hers as well. Her spirit is strong, and she isn't afraid to make her mark or be tough. When meeting new gems she can be shy, and quiet until she decides to open herself up, which doesn't take awhile in many situations. She can be very laid back when she's in her own environment, and is fond of spiraling or spinning in place when she is happy. [Rank]: Citrine is a highly-skilled travel diplomat that is required on every Homeworld ship. Because of her powers, she does her work well and can make peace and calm other gems in case fighting or arguments break out. When she isn't doing that, she is a guard of the ship and looks after all of the gems;making sure they are safe and calm. [Bio/History]: Before she went on the ship, Citrine was an ambassador, who traveled to other Gem-controlled planets to attend meetings and maintain peace. She was one of many gems who did this as a job, and was part of a universe-wide alliance of gem Ambassadors. Her work was hard, but she always was successful, until one fateful day. She had been helping two planets work out their differences, one called Metamorphica and another called Crystilla. Their representatives were two older gems, who had a past full of hate towards one another. After many hours of fighting and arguing, Citrine kept trying to calm them. Each time, it was unsuccessful, and they shoved her aside. It hurt her, both physically and mentally to see these gems fight, and their thoughts corrupted her mind. She had never felt such heated and powerful thoughts, and they ultimately lead to her downfall. She wasn't thinking clearly, and she used her powers, still a secret, to make one kill the other. It took all of her power that she had, which made her retreat into her gem. Afterwards, the gem officials deemed the other gem responsible for the death of the other ambassador gem, and they assumed that Citrine had to retreat into her gem because they injured her. So her life continued, but guilt still grows in her heart, even to this day. [Weapon: A scythe with an orange handle that is very durable and hard. Her blade is a sterling silver, with a gold trim. She fights doing a series of flips, twirls, and gymnastic-like moves, and often yells a battle cry before engaging in battle. She also can be clumsy, which sometimes messes up her fighting stamina in a battle as well. [Dance Style]: Pop [Powers/Abilities]: She has the ability to read thoughts and feelings. She often complains about having too many "voices" in her head, which can become super annoying/overwhelming at times to her. However this power needs polishing and some works; so another gem could possibly teach her how to use her powers to improve her abilities in the future. [Experience]: Medium [Likes and Dislikes]: Citrine like to train, sew ribbons, maintain peace, and help others when she can. She hates to be tortured, to see others in pain, and over powerful emotions that can corrupt her mind. (Also: If you use my OC in your story can you please credit me for my character? Thanks!) |
lololo9 chapter 2 . 8/8/2015 This is great! Please update soon. |
O Loikloik O chapter 2 . 8/2/2015 I absolutely loved the first chapter! There seems to be a quite a lot of diverse characters which is wonderful, keep up the good work. |
Silverbird22 chapter 2 . 8/1/2015 Wonderful chapter! I'm liking this so far, especially Coral for some reason. I hope Scap can appear soon! If your going to use Scap...Its okay if you don't... Update soon! |
Dante Watterson chapter 2 . 8/1/2015 Fantastic Picachuyou, the first chapter of the story is Awesome. :) |
Silverbird22 chapter 1 . 7/29/2015 (This is the reply to the thing you left on one of my stories) How are we supposed to know what gems are taken? In the reviews none of those gems are emeralds...I guess I can just put in another one... Name: Scapolite, Scap for short. Age: A lot older than the crystal gems..I'd say about 12,000 Physical info: 6'0, 180 lbs, light purple eyes, bluish-gray hair that goes down to her neck, golden- yellow skin tone, she wears a dark yellow catsuit with red accents along with red fingerless gloves and pale yellow boots. Gender: Female Weapon: Staff, it's a foot shorter than her and is dark yellow. It's also has a design of three diamonds in it. Power: Super strength, electricity resistance and she can controll Lightning. Rank: I want to say captain as I can see her doing that but I'm gonna go with Gaurd instead. Basically she's there to beat people up. Gem name: Scapolite, located on the back of her right hand, her glove on that hand also shows it. Background: Scapolite fought in the war for earth on the side of homeworld and has tried multiple times to get back and reactivate the kindergarten. They've failed before she ever left homeworld die to not having resources or other crises. She is also in the Guard of Yellow Diamond but was sent to work on the Red Eye by orders of her capitain, Lepiodite. She earned the nickname, Scap, when she was in charge of excuting gems during the war. Being on earth itself makes her feel sick(as in she hates it) and she refues to talk to/about or acknowledge the Crystal Gems. Personailty: Dull, Snarky, cruel, bloodthirsty, and quick to anger. Likes: Fighting, Yellow Diamond, thunderstorms, rain, war, and explosions. Dislikes: Jasper(she sees her as trying to take her position), hyper people, people she sees as tratiors to Homeworld, and being in one place for to long. Misc. info.: She actually despises organic beings and likes to wage war on them, simply because she finds it fun. She also is secretly scared of Yellow Diamond's wrath. She also finds her nickname, Scap, annoying, but goes by it because she dosent like her full name being mispronounced. She will also work with the Cyrstal Gems if it is the only option. And you know how to contact me. Through reviews. So I hope Scapolite isn't taken and the same story with emerald also has a different version of Scap in it, but they are pratically the same in Personailty. I hope you enjoy using her! Update soon! |
Silverbird22 chapter 1 . 7/27/2015 Name: Emerald, Emmy by close friends.(which she dosent have) Age:6,000 or so... Physical info: 4'0,100 lbs, dark green eyes, light green skin, dark waist length green hair and she wears a dark green dress with no patterns or ribbons and no shoes, she also has a pale green cloak with a hood, covering her neck entirely. Gender: Female Weapon: two dark green knives. Power: Super speed. Rank: Pilot. Gem name: Emerald...its on the back of her neck. Hence the cloak. Background: A traveler at heart, Emmy always dreamed of seeing other worlds and despised her homeworld for the way it treated other races, because of this she often speaks out about her homeworld and often dreams of running away. Because of this, she never speaks to most people..and when she does it comes out extremely awkward and wrong. Finally, when she heard about a scouting mission, he took her pilot skills at hand and joined the crew, hoping to see a new world at last... Personailty: Loyal, stubborn, emotionally unstable, kind and caring. Likes: Flying, day dreaming, singing(though she sucks at it) and seeing new places. Dislikes: Eating, partying, thunderstorms(she's afraid of them), and fire. And she also is scared of dying. Misc. info.: She oddly enough has a like-hate relaotionship with most people. And she has no social skills at all. I cannot be contacted in anyway...But I am posting a story with her in a few days so...You can read that and we can semi-communcate threw reviews. Looking foreward to this, Update soon! |
LizardLipz chapter 1 . 7/27/2015 Name: Serpentine Age: around the age of the crystal gems Physical Appearance: female, four and a half feet tall, 104 pounds, yellow reptilian eyes, green skin, has an anthropomorphic lizard body, wears a green dress with a black vein pattern on it that's open in front revealing layered lace and the top half is black with shoulder puffs, has a green sun hat with a darker green flower on it Weapon: Green machete with a black vein pattern on it Gem Power: can cure poison with a touch, can walk on any surface, can sense heat Rank: Lieutenant, is a guard on the ship Gem Name: serpentine, on the back of her neck in the shape of a spike Background: Serpentine was a mercenary. She loves the thrill of adventure. She often took jobs regardless of the dangers, as she was only in it for the money and action. She took the job on the ship so she could see Earth for herself. She's also did her own studies on life forms from other planets, as she's very interested in organic beings and how they function. She trained herself in the wilds of other planets. Personality: rash, intuitive, determined, can be caring and patient when she needs to be, she can be a little bit difficult to open up to but once you get to know her she'll care about you deeply and will always be there for you, once she puts her mind to something she does it Likes/Dislikes: loves food, animals, and music, hates arrogance and when others mock her appearance Miscellaneous: thinks fusion is awesome, but has never fused herself and wants to fuse Skype: curry_frog I've got a drawing of her that I can show you if you ask for it |
Dante Watterson chapter 1 . 7/27/2015 Awesome I have a Oc you can use and here he is :) [Form] [Name] Soren Spessartine [Age] He's the same age as the Crystal Gems (Mostly Amethyst) [Physical Information] He's a mid skinny and muscle, his head and nose is the same shape as Pearl but his nose is smaller. his height is 6'5, weight is 70. His eyes are the color yellow, Skin color is a fire glow of Red, Orange and Yellow, Hair is messy with one bang covering his left eye it's also a fire glow but the colors of Dark Blue, Sky Blue and Blue. Wears red and blue shorts that start from his waist to his knees, blue shoes, and a reddish orange shirt with two stars on his short sleeves. [Gender] Male [Weapon] It's a Long Sword it's the color red of the blade and blue for the handle with a star on it. (He is a expert of swords and sword skills) [Gem Power] He can breath red fire and shoot blue fire from his palms. He can project three fire holograms of himself of the colors Red, Blue and Purple. [Rank] His rank is close to Rose Quartz's rank, and purpose he's on the ship is because he wants to join the Crystal Gems. [Gem Name] His gem name is Spessartine and it's located on his tongue. [Background] Before he crash landed he was thinking of how it would be like to join the Crystal Gems and fight for Earth against Homeworld and the tyrant leader, Yellow Diamond. After he lands on the Beach of Beach City he is discovered by the Crystal Gem Amethyst who saw him laying on the sand of the Beach. [Personality] Personality: Loyal, Honest, and sometimes angered or annoyed bye any-gem that is yelling or bossing him around, except for the Crystal Gems and humans. [Likes/Dislikes] He likes being part of the Crystal Gems, people, food, drinks, heat, arcade games, sand, tropical water, bond fires, fighting Corrupted and HomeWorld Gems, and Amethyst. He dislikes Yellow Diamond, Jasper (Arch Enemy), other Homeworld/Corrupted Gems (Unless there good, like Lapis and the Centipeetle for example), and anyone who hurts his friends and family the Crystal Gems. [Miscellaneous Information] He and Amethyst both like each other when they first meet. [Skype] I can only go through PM to help, but trust me I have some really good ideas for people to use for there stories. :) After reading this PM me :) |