so sorry for your loss

Loved the story. Very well done!

You probably won't understand what I mean but you repeat stuff you've already said by describing it in a different way.

I just started this and it's very good. I just wanted to let you know that Marine's don't call themselves soldiers. They use the saying "Once a Marine, always a Marine". Sorry I just had to say it. My Dad is a Marine and it's something that he always mentions.

Wow! I am blown away by this story. You did a fantastic job. I'll definitely check out the sequel.
Keep up the good writing!

Describing uniform, color/collar. Lokis kneel scene Hw/ he, suck/ sucker. Fight scene's a tad confusing. About Pepper, hse/she.I'm an annoying spell check app.) Yay.

Coulson and her talking after the meeting, lose/ loss. So it IS like biotics. Or am I geeking Mass Effect? (love)

Geeking out. Love it!

First conversation with Fury, here/ hear. Lovely reunion.

I love Steves dancing around, and that shes not connecting dots. Shes out of touch, wasn't a fan of his comics so these are unknown people. Laugh at her interactions with Coulson. They are amazing.

Haha, Chris Evanscharacters). Great chapter.

German/ Germany. Keyboards are hard.

Awesome awsome. Oops.

Moving threw/ through the crowd. Awesome Coulson moment. Exactly the knind of thing I can see him doing. Along with the underhand kipnap attempt, not a kidnappi if you agree to it right. Awesome chapter all around.

Extend/ extent. Entering the computer room, clear or clean? Fight scene was great, Having A disappear loke that, well if this was comic book I'd say your setti g us up for something. The scene with her brother, loved it didn't come across as cliche or anything, plus you know freaky powers. She probably can really see him. Sometimes, when freaking out.