Cute story! So Jack is Jack Hotchner?

You should continue! I like it so far (really wish Reid having a sister is cannon but whateves) i really like the idea of it being a much younger sister who doesnt talk much if at all and Reid needing to help her out. Also the fact that she's been through a trauma she may even be scared to live with Reid. There are so many plot bunnies I could see with this story! Awesome start! Keep up the good work!

Love it! Can't wait to see where it goes :-)

'If I choose to continue...'

Are you serious? If you are confident with your ability to write, you would never tell your readers this. Especially in your summary.

That said, I don't think you're worth the time to even consider.

This looks great so far! I hope you continue!