Not really a bad story at all.

I have some issues however. In the sentence where Deeks is referring to Callen, he would have said "my brother" "moi brat". It is proper grammar, and it is just the way a Russian or slavic speaker would say it.

Your naming conventions are just simply dead badly grossly wrong across the board. The names, male or female would come across first name, father's name, last name, most likely (name) Nikolas Reznikov. It is a Russian thing again, something they WOULDN'T vary on. Deacon, and Sabrina ARE NOT even remotely Russian and would not be used. Lastly, i do not believe that Reznikov would have named his son George, it just doesn't fit, any more than your made up name for him. Sorry, but those things really do stick out.

good story

I think it was a great story. it is very believable. I have seen a few brothers stories on fanfic, I could see Deeks and Callen being brothers. This was a really good story.

Awesome ending! Loved how this story played out!

Just wondering...why didn't you put in that Kensi knows Russian?

OMG, I just found this and am hooked!

I absolutely LOVE the plot line. I love what you've done with Deeks! This is so frickin' good!

Update soon!

Doing a great job

Great story.

hmmmm
the plot thickens

Well...keep in coming.

wow this story is so good keep it up

very interesting

OMG what a chapter I can't wait to see what happens next

hmmm, now they have really got problems
patiently waiting for the next chapter...

great twists,
still reading.
thanks

the plot thickens...
very nice