I really enjoyed this story and your writing. I hope to find you've written both a third part for this and an S2 finale fic. And if not, I sure hope inspiration and time will bring you back soon with more. I like that this ends with Tom seeing the move as a positive one, and that his family will to. It fits with the sand and surf dreams Rachel had of her son and their family. I'd really love to see the twists and turns you put them through on another new adventure, and if you actually worked in a scare like Rachel's dream where Nathan and Tom disappeared in the water.

Great story very well written and of course love the ending. I wish you would write the next story their lives in Florida. I know it’s been two years since you wrote the story but I still would love to readnext chapter in their lives.

Wow a beautiful story. Well written and great fluff. I just love Tom and Rachel pairings and this story takes the cake it is prefect.

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This story is EVERYTHING. Seriously, GREAT JOB. Beautifully written. I bow to you!

Excellent story! Loved the character build-up, and giving each character a good bit of time in the story! Would love to see a side-story of Mike and Kelly!

Ugh, Tom better come back!

NOOOOO! Probably the first chapter ending that I didn't like. That's terrible!

Thank you so much for a beautifully written story.
Can't wait to read more!

Read both your stories within 2 days and really got me hooked
I actually look forward to their adventures in Florida if you wish to continue in the chronicals of the Chandler household and the adventures of the James

great ending to a wonderful story

You did a great job! Thank you. The 2nd Season of The Last Ship is available on Ebay if anyone is interested. I just received my copy today. It comes from Canada on presale.

Thank you for such a lovely story and ending. Truly hope we get more from you! :)

Need stories about the family and kids growing up.

Lovely, can't wait to read more of your works!