Reviews for The Fractured Whole
Hamilton406 chapter 2 . 2/10
Minato wouldn’t trust Ozpin at all. He would see through all of Ozpins manipulations to use his family or use naruto to fight his secret war.
sonic chapter 3 . 10/7/2017
I liked the chapter!
Darkjaden chapter 2 . 5/24/2017
Doesn't Minato have the Yin of Kurama seal inside him?
desdelor97 chapter 3 . 7/3/2016
This was a great chapter,
Please keep up the great work.
samurai89 chapter 3 . 1/3/2016
A fairly unique concept, looking forward to more!
OBSERVER01 chapter 3 . 10/24/2015
excellent fic.i cant believe i didnt notice this one.
BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 3 . 10/23/2015
This is sweet! I'm hoping for more!
the-Lazy-King chapter 3 . 10/21/2015
Alright! After a chapter like that I feel like I have to say something, which sadly is a gripe. You do know that Summer is not yet confirmed dead right. As far as I am aware no one ever really confirmed her fate not Monty(when he was alive R.I.P), not any of the writers, not the voice actors, and even if you want to go there not even Jeff Williams the guy who co wrote "Red like Roses pt. 2" really stated whither or not she was dead in his explanations of what the song means. Even in story the most we get about her fate is she went on a mission and never returned, meaning they never found the body and ASSUMED she died.

Come to think of we don't even know if the mission she was on was Grimm extermination or something else.

Anyway my point is Summer's fate is unknown and we can't say for sure if she is dead or alive. So saying it is even remotely cannon they got her body to give her a funeral is not true. This not to say you can't have her killed but know it is not cannon (yet!). So if you are trying to keep things as cannon as possible I would advice you do redo this chapter. However it your story and you get to decide it's direction so feel free to ignore this review.

Regardless of what you do good luck on the continuation of this story.
Old School Kaiju chapter 2 . 10/10/2015
Baby ruby is so CUTE it hurts how cute that beach scene was X3
Reemikz chapter 1 . 9/14/2015
A lot of speculation goes around about what naruto would truly be like if he was raised by his parents and I have to say when you take into consideration of how he turned out in cannon with no adults in his life until he turned 10-12 (not really counting 3rd hokage as from what I know it was stated he only visited 1-2 a month due to him being busy) and a lot of negative attention or not attention

My opinion? He would still have his main personality but like any kid I believe he would try and imitate his father just as he idolized the 4th hokage (his father) he would idolize his own dad now that he's alive just as much this would most likely result in a mix of the parents personalities instead of the one naruto naturally/ forced developed to hide his pain. So without a doubt he would be more calm as his father would most likely help him control his emotions better

He would be in my opinion without a doubt the same person except that he would be wiser/smarter due to his fathers one on one education stronger due to early training and the fact he would pay attention to it unlike in the academy here he would have specialized training the final thing is he would be more confident in himself a lot of his confidence early on was faked until he started gaining love from his friends and finally his mothers love

Overall I think naruto would simply develop quicker to his cannon counter part and that's about it mean he only really started improving/changing when he graduated
silentstrixe chapter 3 . 9/12/2015
Quite amusing that final bit about Yang finding her Semblance before even unlocking her aura, and how she used it.

Besides that, this story seems pretty decent so far. While you aren't far enough for me to decide if it actually is a really good one or not, it has caught my attention enough for me to decide to follow it and see how it turns out.

Keep up the good work. I will be looking forward to seeing more of this story.
The Obsidian Pen chapter 3 . 9/11/2015
Yeah, this is awesome! I am really excited to see canon, but I am also excited to see how this life goes. Good luck with life.
correnhimself316 chapter 1 . 9/11/2015
I am thinking perhaps Obito up and Kamuied the entire family to Remnant? That or perhaps Six Paths Sage interfered?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
Every time I see the title for this FF I can't help but think of the new South Park game, The Fractured But Whole...
Windninja1000 chapter 3 . 9/9/2015
Great chapter! Can't wait till the next chapter! :D
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