Very spooky, I like this!

Great stuff, please make more. And put more pokemon action in too! Ingo has a chandelure, it would be logical if he used it in situations like this, seeing that it's a ghost type.

Bravo! I haven't seen a fanfic for awhile involving the submas, keep up the great work! Can't wait for the next chapters.

Love it. Very tense, and even though nothingg much is actually happening, the descriptions keep interest.