This is adorable! I never even thought of a Natsu x Lucy x Lisanna but now I ship it and want more! This story is very good. The idea is interesting, the writing is very good, and there are no obvious grammar errors.

My new Otp
The NaLu vs NaLi drama can go to hell
This is so freaking cute

Nice job.

I love this so much!

The heater breaking down when you need it reminds me of my printer. *Pats printer* "Good boy!"
"Maybe he'd be nice and let her use him as a heater." "You wanna be my heater?" - When I read this I was like... YEAP! And then Lisanna interrupted.
"Happy's staying with Mira-nee tonight, he said he wants to sleep somewhere with a working heater." "Don't blame him," Lucy grumbled. I LOLed at this. An interesting variation of the "Happy stays with Wendy/Carla" which is normally used. After reading the rest of
the fic I understood why this is here. Nice.
"Natsu snorted and walked over to the two women. He wrapped his arm around Lucy and gave Lisanna a quick kiss as well." - At first I thought that Lisanna was going to be just a side character/third wheel/anti NaLu, but then this happens and then... "Lisanna
chuckled and kissed Lucy, giving her bottom lip a quick nip before pulling away." YEAP! NaLuLi! I LOVE YOU!
"(she didn't care about star gazing right now, she just wanted to cuddle)" "Lucy poked her head out and pouted at them with a huff." - so cute.
"and she slipped her numb fingers under Lisanna's shirt." - We all know where this is going...
"Besides, being sore means massages tomorrow and we all know where those lead." "Lisanna laughed. Look who's getting kinky." "Shh, sleepy time for kinky Lucy." - ... I lost it!

I liked all of it. These were the things that just stood out to me. An amazing job. We need more of these. Perhaps a continuation with "massages" in the morning? ;)

lol.
cute n fluffy .

That was adorable. Once again your story put a huge smile on my face. .

I absolutely love this. It's so adorable. Usually I don't really like reading about Lisanna even though she's a sweet character. You made my day. Do you ever think you'll make one with NatsuxLucyxGray as a cute pairing? There's hardly any on this site. Anyway, because of this story I went to your page to read many more of your stories. _

I really liked this! It was so original from any other fics I've read. I like how the three of them are connected, instead of all the hate I've read in other fics towards poor Lisanna. Nalu is always my fave, but this combination is a definite win for me! :D LoL, and lucky Natsu, I must say!

IM SCREAMING?!

Holy SHIT where to start? Firstly, I apologize for not noticing this until you made the post on tumblr, I don't have any notifications set up anymore. BUT ONTO THE FIC! This was adorable. Like, 'rot-my-teeth-out', 'drown-in-fluff', 'oh god i think my heart is stopping?' E. I love how you didn't even try to ease in, you were just full-throttle towards OT3 Valhalla, witness me homophobic-shitlords.

Their interactions are amazingly sweet and really show how comfortable they are with each other. It's clear the three of them have been together for a while. Also, there was such an easy balance between the three. It didn't feel like one was left out or neglected so you could focus on the other two. Everything just flowed between them beautifully.

As always, your writing is a delight to read. You have a way of making your fics so easy to read; I never had to stop and try to puzzle out what had happened or what you meant. It was a wonderful read, and I'm super-excited to see more of these three from you!

Also anyone who wants to say shit about this fic or pairing can meet me in the fucking pit I wil E.

*loud wailing* this was so cute? so nicely done and just an overall delight to read!

Wtf this is so confusing...are ALL of them in a relationship? Omg this is new I've never seen a fanfiction like this. I wasn't particularly fond of it, but props to you for originality.