I was not expecting to find this weirdest concept I've ever read I don't know whether to applaud you for your imagination or call you out for I don't know for once in my life I'm actually speechless I don't know how to describe it your story is so unique and so different I don't know how or weather to give you praise or flame you I just don't know I mean it's so different congratulations you actually flabbergasted me with this story very impressive but I recommend you doing this as a One-Shot it doesn't seem to be the type of story to be more than just one chapter

Brilliant!

Still more believable than the Left Behind series...

But seriously, I couldn't stop laughing! This is the most bizarre concept I have ever heard of, but it works so well. Plus I could write an essay on how this is an apt description of Christianity (in a nutshell: you surrender your eternal soul to a mysterious entity with the hope of doing Good), but I don't think it would fit the character limit. Great work!