Nice story. Feels quite different from Canon... I do wish there was some more development though.

The Grim behavior bits were very interesting.

No aura?

Interesting story.

Now I understand the little reference...

Oh Ruby, don't talk about Crescent Rose like that okay? she's sweet only just a bit unfit at the moment.

This reminds me of “Nomad of Nowhere”.

Beautiful and wonderful story! Thank you very much! The story is so melancholic and serene, interessting and enthralling. I would love to read more but for my misfortune it is complete. There should be more people reading it. Maybe put an other tag/genre on it to appear at more search results... Be that as it may, great work and my utmost gratitude!

Well! That was incredibly abrupt. Are we to be expecting a sequel or was this the definitive endpoint of our journey? It was pretty damn good either way, I iust was not expecting it to come to a conclusion so suddenly.

Great story, this was a very interesting retold version of rwby, what would happen if ruby meet everyone at different points of time. From blake before she left the white fang, too yang staying in the city, too weiss at the tournament, and of course ruby to being a wanderer. I'm happy that despite meeting under different circumstances, they'd still found each other, i'm even more happy with the budding romance of white rose. Overall, this was a darker and adventures reboot of rwby, great work

While I'm sad you don't expand on this excellent story I hope that later you can revisit it with new ideas.

Thank you.

this is not the end of the story isn't it?

Aww it's over ? I'm really going to miss this, thank you for all the writing you did, it was a great story.

Oh. Huh. That was quite sudden, wasn't it? So… sequel maybe? Please?

I really enjoyed this story. I can't wait for your next work.

Another great chapter, can't wait for next Thursday.