I'd enjoy it but the lack of a period or comma before the final quotation mark bothers me.

Best E.N.D. Story ever, though I wish you didn’t get rid of demon Natsu. But nobody can have everything, unless they make it themselves.

I was is actually the older brother,Zeref or Natsu?Why did Natsu keep calling Zeref 'lil bro when he is in demonic form?

Whoa! I can't believe it's over! You did a wonderful job with this and it was a fun read. I like that there was one last memory from E.N.D that showed the demon's softer sides. No one is really truly evil and you showed it here with that job and thank you fro writing.

Well I hope you are still gonna continue this story, iv'e been waiting for a nalu ending for a long time.

That was...unexpected...and that was so very cruel that Zeref watched his 3-4 year-old brother die, I mean really.

Love the Story XD but one question, would you ever write other pairings like NaZa, LoLu, GrayLu, or NaLi? Just curious.

Aww! This was sweet! Favorite line of the chapter had to come from Natsu though! "Holy mother of fucking everything!" bhaha I laughed super hard at that!

Awww how sweet! I can soon hear the pitter patter of little NALU babies running around! Please update soon!

Holy shit... Creepy obsessed Zeref is hilarious!

Great chapter! Hope you update soon!
This is a great story, it's very well-written.

I spent the entire DAY reading this book...It was AWESOME! I cri because of some character's deaths but y'know, it was a war. Anyway, I really liked this and thanks for stopping my heart so much during this story.

really love this story cant wait for new chapters

Cool, really really like this

bhaha! Oh Laxus! You slay me! (pun intended) The whole "no naughty stuff in MY GUILD" bit was pretty hilarious! XD