fantastic writing.

I had been searching for this story again. it's one of my favorites because it highlights how incredibly dangerous beast boy can be. usually all I read on here are stories that make him look incompetent or weak. kudos to you

Such a sad ending :(

Wow. You had me thinking that this was still a work in progress halfway through chapter 4 right up until the end. Then it was over. I was expecting so much more, but actually think you've left that on such a depressing, somber yet perfect ending. An absolutely dark and wonderful story written with amazing detail and full of the raw and gut wrenching emotion of loss and pain. You did a fantastic job, amazingly written and thought out. Superb.

*sob* Absolutely... Horrible! I cannot say how well thought out and amazing this was bcause of the ending. It wouldnt be apprpriate. Heart wrenching.

*wipes snot* Amazing job in exploring the dark side! I always wondered, what if the titans could not save a civilian or casualty in time, what if a titan died and if what if a villan was killed by a superhero accidental or not. This felt very real. Like something that could have happened in the event a titan died. Also I like how view BB not being an idiot. Sure he was carefree, a jokerster and oblivious but no doubt, with maturaty and raven by his side, that would all be in the past over time.
Great job btw I cannot stress this enough.

a good written story is a beautiful thing, even if its something totally horrible T_T

Well, that was...FLIPPIN' TWISTY! I wasn't prepared for that at all! You caused me to actually gasp with shock. I would normally be concerned that you wouldn't have anywhere to go from here, but I'm confident in your abilities as an author and judging by past experiences I know you can do something great with this. Although not in any way does that translate to me agreeing with how this turned out! Oh the Beast Boy! OH THE PAIN!

Wow. Good story. Excellent writing skills. But SERIOUSLY! You had to kill Beast Boy and Raven! Anyway, good story over can't wait to read more.

Wow I did not see that coming

Oh, that hurt. Just when I was slightly happy that they were finally acknowledging Beast Boy intellect and that Robin was standing up to the JLA... Damn.

Dang, now they're both gone. On the surface it seems that this Tory is over. Why do I have the sinking feeling that a strange twist awaits us? Like BB and raven coming back from the dead.

My only surprise is that Starfire didn't join the execution the moment she heard about their participation in Raven's dead. I guess she simply didn't had the time.
For once, I really hope that Robin can put his strict morality aside and help Beastboy. There is nothing left to do about the Hive after all. I simply don't want to see him putting BB on Jail or any mental institution. By the look of it, it's like Beast Boy would not even protest or care.
By the way, the amount of detail you put in every animal's characteristics is marvelous and very welcome. A rare thing to see in fanfics.
Looking forward the next chapter.

Oh goodness, I was afraid this would happen. Will BB surrender, or will his team be forced to take him down? Or worse, will he take his teammates down?

This may have been the single greatest "Control Freak Phones In" moment in all of TT FanFiction. Although you may have absolutely shattered my heart with these opening chapters, you've also captured it and I have to hang on for the rest of the ride.

Hmmm ... the HIVE 5? I think that's a red herring. Now the comic book H.I.V.E. maybe, but they only thing the two groups have in common is the name.

I also suspect that once Gar is finished mourning that he'll be out for blood, no matter what Robin says about the Titans not killing. And I doubt that he could stop Starfire or Cyborg ... or even himself for that matter, from avenging Raven's brutal death.