I hope you will update this story. I really like it and I am very curious to know what will happen next.

What? What did we do to deserve this? It's bad enough that Ally is stuck married to Renly, but she managed to get one ounce of happiness from their marriage and you take it away? Why don't you just stab me in the heart, huh? It might hurt less.

Very interesting! I hope you don't give up on this story, I look forward to seeing where you're going with this.

Pls update!

What happen did the baby survived or not? Did it really make her snapped at Ned now? Continue I wanna know.

I need more please!

Loved it!

This is amazing! If you ever feel the spark to write anymore I will definitely be reading it!

the end?

Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!

It's been ages since you updated this barely-started story but I do hope you will come back to it. It has so much potential and I enjoy what you have posted so far. I really want to see where you might take it. I have read lots of GoT stories but not one such as this and I got so excited when I found it only to be disappointed in the shortness of it as well as the length of time since it was last updated. Please don't give up!

A very sad chapter. And I don't blame Ally for being pissed at her dad. Hope you update soon!

Good story please continue, this is very well written and I want to see what happens with Ally

love to see more
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I really enjoy this story. Hope you continue it. It's really sad Alysanna is in a lifeless marriage. And that she lost her baby. I think renly will leave her behind at kingslanding. Because he loves loads more than her.