Reviews for Waiting
Guest chapter 2 . 10/18/2018
If Zelda snd Groose collect enough gratitude crystals snd get them to Link before snyone knows what is going on they could turn him human, just as Link saved Batreaux
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2018
There is also the problem with Link's soul- originally Hylia cast a spell on the first Hero- the one during the war that created Skyloft, so that he would be reborn again when the time arrived to seal Demise away again so they could fight together again, but this time as equals- she shed her divinity not for power but to be with the one being who loved the land of Hyrule as much as she did.
Then Demise placed a powerful curse on both Link and Zelda- that would force them to be reborn again and again and his own spirit would be able to follow thrm like a parasite and the cycle wod continue until his incarnation was finally victorious and swallowed the world in darkness. Link's soul is forever bound to Zelda's and Demise- who apparently had enough power to kill a demon sword. That level of dark magic cannot be removed- and connonly it is not- therefore Link's soul has not fully been purified and the sword will be flawed.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2018
Seems a waste of time and even a flaw to allow for child birth. If the only way to become king/queen is to either be the demon sword and wait for your master to die, or to kill the current king/queen AND the sword, then there is no point in bearing children unless you want them to conspire to murder you.
truthed chapter 6 . 6/24/2016
I love how you've painted such a detailed and interesting world in this fic! it's grabbed my attention right from the beginning with the really unique plot line, and I love how you've developed the characters! especially showing more of Hylia's personality in Zelda. also the Priestess. I love her so so So Much!
MissQuestions-LaAmazingNabo chapter 11 . 5/21/2016
And what a ride this was :) ! I'll admit I was skeptical of this story at first (around the time you changed Link''s appearance ) but then you used it to further the plot and characters.
I liked that even though this was GhiraLink, you didn't keep Link at his side (what Ghirahim did was unforgivable, conscious or not), and that Ghirahim did feel bad for allowing this to happen and perhaps atoning his mistakes by abolishing Demon Lordship and taking better care of Link Jr?

Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that you earned yourself a follower.
~Nabo
mysticalgems chapter 11 . 5/20/2016
Well... not at all how I was expecting. I did manage to finish this faster than I thought I would. I love this chapter too nonetheless. :) Not how I was expecting it to end, nor did I expect such an outcome. I am for the upmost at a loss of words really, for I just don't know what all to think. o_0

I'm amazed to have said this much. My mind has been blown away, so that is the response you shall get from me. However, just for you, for old times sake, I STILL HAD HOPED THAT LINK COULD'VE BEEN CHANGED BACK! XD There, that was for you. :3

With that I will end here. It was a pleasure and honor to read your story. :)
DON'T STOP BEING SERIOUSLY AWESOME YOU SERIOUSLY AWESOME AND WONDERFULLY AMAZING AND BRILLIANTLY LOVELY AND SERIOUSLY SUPER AND SERIOUSLY FABULOUS AND SERIOUSLY FANTASTIC WRITER!

Your FAN-READER! Anna :3
Lord Geovanni chapter 11 . 5/20/2016
Interesting chapter. The ending is a bit sudden and abrupt, but works well as an ending. I feel as if there are many questions left unanswered, however not every story tells everything. I do like how you had Link claim his freedom however it came. I also like how Link didn't die from the ritual to free him. The destruction of the Demon Sword papers was a nice touch. As I sit here for this review, I cannot help but make more and more questions, however.

I also noticed how you finished up and have an ending open to a sequel if you decide such. I am sure I will be keeping an eye. Just in case you start another story soon. This pairing is not one that I like all that much, however the complexities you insinuated with Hylia left me perplexed with where the story went. I am quite glad I stuck around for this story.
Blazingfire chapter 10 . 5/15/2016
IT'S GOOD THAT YOU UPDATED ! THANKS FOR THIS GOOD CHAPTER AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE ! keep going cuz you're GREAT !
Lord Geovanni chapter 10 . 5/14/2016
I was actually thinking about this story just a few days ago. I am incredibly worried that you're going to have Link forgive Ghirahim instead of force the contract broken. I feel as though he really should break the contract and just leave both sides to their fate.
mysticalgems chapter 10 . 5/14/2016
OH MAN! IT IS INDEED SHORT! BUT STILL REALLY GOOD! I still don't like the fact how things turned out between Link and Zelda, best friends to well... this! :/

An evil mean Zelda ... still strange to view her as... but I still just go with whatever. :3 I wish Link was able to change but ya know how I feel. XD

Also that was a low blow she dealt. SHE SHOULD HAVE KNOWN HIS REASONS! SHE'S SUPPOSED TO KNOW JUST ABOUT EVERYTHING! EVIL ZELS TOYING WITH WHO WAS ONCE HER BEST FRIEND! SO WRONG! :(

BUT NOW I SERIOUSLY CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! SERIOUSLY!

With that said I will end here and I will be waiting for your next AWESOME CHAPTER! So until then YOU SERIOUSLY AWESOME AND WONDERFULLY AMAZING AND BRILLIANTLY LOVELY AND SERIOUSLY SUPER AND SERIOUSLY FABULOUS FANTASTIC WRITER!

DON'T STOP BEING SERIOUSLY AWESOME!

Your FAN-READER! Anna :3
Freezingblaze chapter 1 . 5/11/2016
Your fiction is SO great and I've been dying to see if you want to update ! Please don't tell me that you'll abandon this AMAZING fiction cuz I'm in love with it !
Moon Maden84848 chapter 9 . 3/26/2016
this story is amazing my reading span lately been shorting but this story has revived my faith in the fandom it is just amazing I wish there were more link sword story out there please update soon to quench the suspense of what will happen next
mysticalgems chapter 9 . 2/15/2016
OH BOY! WHAT A PREDICAMENT THEY ARE IN! XD A DRUNKEN GHIRAHIM! NEVER THOUGHT I'D READ ABOUT THAT! XD I LOVE IT! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! VERY CREATIVE! SERIOUSLY! I SERIOUSLY LOVE IT! I honestly don't know what to expect now... well not from this point. What to anticipate has gone out the window. XD All I do know is that I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I AM LITERALLY ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT! XD

YOU DID SERIOUSLY AWESOME WITH THIS CHAPTER! SERIOUSLY! With that all said, I will end here and I will be waiting for your next awesome chapter! So until then YOU SERIOUSLY AWESOME AND WONDERFULLY AMAZING AND BRILLIANTLY LOVELY AND SERIOUSLY SUPER FABULOUS AND SERIOUSLY FANTASTIC WRITER!
DON'T STOP BEING SERIOUSLY AWESOME!

Your FAN-READER! Anna :3
NarupokeeAurorafan chapter 9 . 2/14/2016
Awww men poor link :( . I really enjoyed this chap and can't belive it's almost over :D ! It was a great story ! Till next time bye*
WolfRunner326 chapter 9 . 2/14/2016
FREEEEEEDOOOOOOOMMMMM!
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