Really good fanfiction! Just some grammar mistakes. Plz update!

Please continue this story, I know it's been years since you've updated this, but it's really good and deserves continuing.

This is great! PLEASE update!

I love this! I hope there are more updates in the future! :D great job!

Update.

Yoda is a Jedi Master. So is Obi-Wan Kenobi. Anakin Skywalker is a Jedi Knight.

Please continue! I love your story!

Absolutely love this story. Really good AUs where Anakin doesn't turn to the dark side can be difficult to find (not that people who write them are bad, I just find them difficult to follow and stay engaged in).

A few things in particular I enjoyed:

Almost all of the Anakin-Leia stuff, and quite a bit of the Padme-Luke focused scenes (particularly Florrum, Kamino, the classroom and the abduction chapters)
Putting in an OC (or is he?) as the Vader replacement. Adds a lot of intrigue to the story and is actually something different and fun, rather than Barriss/Grand Inquisitor/Starkiller
The divergence point exposition in chapter 9(?) I feel is probably the most realistic way it would happen (considering the subject of this fic)
Absolutely love the Lothal Jedi Temple scene. Good old Yoda screwing around with everyone :D
The first 6 chapters are legit top-notch

Some things I wasn't personally a fan of:

- Feel the time jump between 12 and 13 is a bit too much honestly. A chapter (or even 2) in between would really fix it up and connect it together a bit better.
- Chapters 8 and 9 tend to drag a bit too much for my liking.
- Some Padme-Luke focused parts drag a little as well.

Spelling and grammar occasionally a bit annoying (but IDK if English is your first language, so I'll let this one slide).

Would love to see this one get finished off (PLEASE!). So much intrigue.

Overall - awesome job

When considering how Luke and Leia unknowingly followed the career of one parent but ended up so much like the other in temperament, it’s fascinating to see someone acknowledge that by pairing up the parent and child most like each other in mood even if they chose the career path of the other.
I was initially put out that you didn’t immediately depict the events that led to Anakin escaping his fall to the Dark Side in this version of events, but the scene in which you answered that question dealt with my issues regarding that omission very effectively. With that resolved, the central idea of Anakin and Padme splitting up to keep the twins’ existence secret makes sense, and there’s a certain amusement in seeing how the two groups work together, each child showing their core personality traits while receiving such a drastic new upbringing from their canon history.
Granted, the implications of the Emperor’s interest in Luke in particular as a potential apprentice are a point for concern, and I still wonder where the ‘new’ apprentice came from (to say nothing of how that guy ended up with a breathing mask even if he obviously isn’t a complete Vader rip-off), but you have enough points of interest here that I’m certainly looking forward to seeing where this storyline goes in future.

Nooo! Pl plz plz continue this! This story is amazing and beautiful!

I love how you foreshadowed Luke being pulled to the dark side, I think it would be cool to see in the future chapters Luke and anakin switching roles where Luke is tempted by lord palpatine but doesn't join them in the end when his father saves him. Really love this book btw!

That was a great chapter!

Is it going to be obi-wan!

I laughed so hard at that part! "wrestling" poor Leia lol!

I absolutely love this book! Amazing job!