i love it! the sweet tingy thing.

You're a great writer! i love how you portray luffy and nami. just asking if you could update your other story. looking forward to it..

Can't wait for more!

I ha e no clue either

This was sweet and beautiful

This fic is fun to read :)

Ahhhhhhh I'm kinda disappointed in Franky since he has feelings for robin because I am a fan of zoro and robin but I know this story revolves around LuNa but I am also a fan of ZoRo But I am not saying you have to change the feels just for me just continue I looooooovethis fanfic a LOT it is one the best ones I have ever read even though it's not finished but whatever... ;)

Hahah I'm dying XDDDDDDDD zoro is just XDD I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS FANFIC :3 :D

Ahhhhhhh so funny xD hahah this fanfic is really awesome even though I read only 2 pages (chapters) of it :T plus I love how you just try not to make them too ooc ;)

AHHHHH THIS IS SO AWESOME I LOVE THIS SO FAR! :D *Fan girls about this fan fic*

Just keep it normal. The grand line is huge and it takes time from island to island. Maybe they can come across a town that is under the tyranny of a corrupt Marine that shows up every so often to collect protection money. Luffy and Nami could be drawing closer, going on actual dates and looking forward to a romantic festival. The marine could show up, Luffy could be owning him with his eyes closed, he gets mad and slaps Nami (nothing big), and Luffy goes Arlong destroyer on him and shows himself an amazing boyfriend afterwards in how attentive he is and how much he cares. Just simple, like something you could slip in between the normal story arc. A breather from the big villains, but still with character growth. What do you think? Can't wait for more!

nice chapie friend

That was too good! I love it! Can't wait for more! I loved that line, we've been together for 10 minutes. Nice stuff

Have Luffy immediately tell them as they're coming on deck and they can all fall over. You can have Sanji go on a rant, but give his blessing. Zoro can make a comment about if Luffy's sure about choosing Nami, and Luffy can confirm and make an innocent comment about Zoro should confess too, but without saying that it's Robin. Usopp and Franky can assume it Sanji much to the twos irritation, which sparks a fight as they make comments about how they believe they're right. Robin can interrupt, kiss Zoro on the cheek saying, Sorry Cook-San but this swordsman is mine. Zoro blushes, Sanji breaks down over both girls being taken, the others have an "ohhhhh" moment saying how that makes a bit more sense, Nami and Robin start joking about the others new boyfriend, and Luffy tells Zoro how he told him it would be easy to confess and how on the next island the 4 of them can go out together! Just another day for the Strawhat crew! Just a thought. Loved this and can't wait for more!

I love luna update soon!