Fantastic Jurassic World one-shot! Agreed with what you've said about these brothers. Their sibling dynamics are great, and I loved how protective Zach was of Gray. Loved the way you explored Zach's thought process here, as he finally let himself stop being strong. Loved when Gray hugged him and they told each other they loved one another. :)

Umm I actually cried reading this? Like this is absolutely amazing! Thank you so much. I could practically feel their emotions! You nailed this and I love it so much!

I loved the dynamics between the Mitchells brothers. I think you captured Zach really well in this story.

Just too sweet. We need more genuine brother stories in many movies. Thanks for writing this one!

Sweet

I loved it! :D

This was wonderul! You perfectly captured Zach's thoughts and motivations. The way you portrayed their brotherly bond pulled at my heartstrings. Zach and Gray's storyline was my favorite part of the movie too. Hooray for sibling dynamics!

Awwwww, the ending is so sweet! Fluffiness rules!

Loved it!

I loved this! This was amazing and awesomely written :)

I loved this! Have you thought more about how you want to write about Zack taking care of Baby Gray?

CHAPTER 2

I can't help but agree, Nick and Ty really portray the brotherhood that the Mitchell brothers have. Great story!

*High pitched screaming*
This story was so perfect I loved it!
I love brotherly-fluff stories about Zach and Gray.
Hope you write more stories soon; I love your writing style!

Really well captured. Good job!
-K