Yo! When are you coming back?!

OMG I FREAKING LOVE THIS FANFICTION! PELASE, I NEED MORE OF THIS!

OH EM GEE okay this chapter is all sorts of HUHUHU

But i trust you! I hope they all get out of this okay! Ahhhh! When are Roy and Riza going to get a break )’:

Again, great work so far!

i love how Wrath and Lust are required to work together hahahaha so my royai fangirl heart can hope xx

i LOVE how badass Olivier is and you introduced her so well xx

Awww poor Grumman ):

The EdWin here was so cuuuuute hihi

Oh my heart couldn’t handle the pseudo Royai here wooo! I had to actively remind myself that Lust was behind Riza’s actions lol

LOVE THIS

Personally didn’t mind the lack of action here, i’m just so amazed with the way you write!

And, yayyyy! Riza’s still fighting!

i think i already said this but AWWW i really love how Ed cares for Riza huhu

Also: i LOVE Knox’s recalling of the Ishval War and Roy and Riza’s motivations ‘:

So intense! Whew!

i hope Riza fights through huhuhu great writing! i am so hooked xx

AHHHH poor Roy and Riza and Team Mustang and Ed and everyone! ):

i hope things look up soon, great work!

Aww Ed’s denial is so cute haha! i got Parental!EdRiza feels

Wooo! I love your talent, it’s amazing how you merged the actual series and your fic. Love love this!

HAHAHA “stay safe” go go go fight for your girl, Roy!

Loving this so far! Your idea of having them BOTH turned into homunculi is so intriguing xx

Oooooh how are they hiding their ouroboros tattoos? O: are Riza’s eyes permanently purple?

So glad i found this! Excited to catch up with all your current chapters!

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Because my heart wasnt broken enough apparently.
What an amazing chapter! Loved the dialogue and the interactions between Ed and Winry/Marco, and Lust and Pride. But man did this ending hurt. The moment I think they can have a little, just a TINY BIT of peace, you end the chapter like that. Queen of Angst indeed. Im broken and I love you.