This is so good! I feel really bad for four though. I mean, everything he has done, well... he didn't mean too and now everyone is taking it out on him. I don't know how he is gonna redeem himself. I just hope (not in a bad way) that Tris messed up somehow, making it a bit more even.

PLEASE HURRY UP WITH THE CHAPTERS THEY R SO INTERESTING! :)

omfg if u dont continue i might cry.

Jesus christ! What assholes, I would NEVER forgive him! People can be so mean, I'm glad I'm finally out of high school.

Hey, I just read your story and it is amazing! I would love for you to continue it although i completely understand if you can't. I can't log in for some reason...

nooooo please just write one more chapter this one is such a cliff hanger will they get together and hook up or will tris be pissed and kick him out and be embarrassed? Please just write one more chapter this story is too good! Don't give up!

Please please please don't leave this story I love it its amazing! Everyone gets writers block but please don't leave this story just take a little break from it and then you should think of something just please don't leave this story.

Its called writers block and i'm really hoping that it won't force you to stop writing, I thought you were doing great. So I am really hoping that I will get to read more of this!

Writer's block. That pees me off

I usually don't review on other people's stories unless its important...but omg please don't leave this story! I feel you on the whole writers block thing, mostly because I'm going through it right now with my current stories. But pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee don't leave! Take a break to get your thoughts together if you need to but, don't leave! If you do leave ('cause its totally your choice) can you please send me a PM explain how the story was going to end? (Like was Fourtris gonna happen or nahh?)

I liked the story. Writers block sucks! I'll get that too but within a few days up to a few weeks i think of at least one thing that gets me going again. Everybody gets writers block. Anyway, good luck with your other fanfics!

Honestly I really liked this story I checked almost everyday to see if you did updated and I'm a little disipointed you are leaving the your story was never to little or to much. I understand you don't want to continue you but I'm pretty sure you are letting down many people. But promise to make another story just a great as this one maybe better

Writer's block? It's okay! For your first, you did great!

I can't wait for you to update this is really good

Uh oh dis gon get good

Ohhhh that talk... hint hint!